Comments | of_hearts: on the football field

of_hearts

on the football field - one shot

Mar 22, 2010 19:56

Glee. Puck/Rachel. 1,548 words. PURE 150% ESTABLISHED RELATIONSHIP FLUFF, in the same "'verse" as the others. PG-13 (I guess?) for language and innuendo? Quick shout out to une_fille: you aight. Oh and this was entirely inspired by this photo:

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ship: puck/rachel, genre: fluff, fic: one-shot, tv: glee

Comments 32

bklyangel March 23 2010, 00:24:37 UTC

AWW Puck and Rachel playing football!

musical_jay March 23 2010, 00:27:02 UTC

Rachel tackling the hell out of Puck? Adorable. <3

curve March 23 2010, 00:30:09 UTC

I had the HUGEST grin on my face the entire time I was reading this. Loved everything about it.

Oh, and "Kiss and make it better?" I DIED.

greydawning March 23 2010, 00:30:35 UTC

I LOVE YOU SO MUCH FOR USING THAT PICTURE

Seriously dying from the cuteness here, bb.

dustbusting March 23 2010, 00:31:20 UTC

When did you read my mind?? And when can you do it again?

I've always had in mind a scene just like this whenever I see that picture. Now it actually exists and I feel horridly smug, as if the universe somehow revolves around me. Thank you for making my self-centered dreams a reality.

This was wonderful and there was a lot of story packed into it, considering how brief it was. I really got a strong sense of where their relationship was at and where it might be going just from the few lines of dialog. Plus, it was just sweet and fun, which made it easy to read and love. Thanks for writing!