win some, lose some - part three: august (1/3)

[of_hearts]

Glee. 7,026 words. Noah Puckerman; Puck/Rachel. The summer after Puck's junior year, picking up where we left off. In this section: SAY HEY, IT'S MAY AUGUST! You know what that means? Deep-fried Oreo's and county fairs, obviously. (For previous months: JUNE, JULY.)

A/N: End of the academic year craziness made me really nervous I'd have to put

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[mancrave]

Ok, I love Puck. I really do. But my god! I want to slap him so bad right now lol. For such a stud he is so unbelievably clueless when it comes to Rachel. So much so that a teeny tiny part of me thinks she'd be better off with Bam. Though I feel like such a Puckleberry traitor for even thinking that! Still, at least he gets it right sometimes. Hopefully the rest of August will be spent getting it more right than wrong! And Bleek is totally crushing on Ethan, nice touch.

Another great chapter, can't wait for the rest *g*

[of_hearts]

OH GOODNESS, I'm so sorry for responding to this a million years after you actually posted it. I'm the worst author ever! Hopefully better late than never?

For such a stud he is so unbelievably clueless when it comes to Rachel.
OMG, AND GIRLS IN GENERAL, RIGHT? Puck is such a doofus, I don't even know where to begin.

So much so that a teeny tiny part of me thinks she'd be better off with Bam.
OMG DID YOU ACTUALLY JUST SAY THIS? NGL, I love Bammers so I can't say I oppose this ship.

Though I feel like such a Puckleberry traitor for even thinking that!
You're not though! It just means you're human! LOL.

Hopefully the rest of August will be spent getting it more right than wrong!
UM LOL WILL HAVE TO WAIT AND SEE. But I have good news! I'm about to post part two so hopefully you'll get some of your questions resolved. Or none at all, LOL? I promise by the end of the series (because I do have a one-shot sequel planned) it'll all make sense.

Thanks again for taking the time to comment! You guys are amazing! <3333

[comeundone]

Puck was such an asshole this chapter, oh my god, but I loved it. He needs a good slap or two but I liked when won Rachel the hippo. I just... don't want him near any cheerio ever again.

Also sometimes I get the feeling that he's really starting to fall for Rachel (as much as he can) but then he pretends he doesn't so much that... it kind of comes across as he doesn't. I'm not sure if that makes sense but I agree with the comment above me, I hope they start getting things more right than wrong!

[of_hearts]

Puck was such an asshole this chapter, oh my god, but I loved it.
OMG, isn't this the essence of Puck though? He's such a ~paradox.

Also sometimes I get the feeling that he's really starting to fall for Rachel (as much as he can) but then he pretends he doesn't so much that...It kind of comes across as he doesn't.
Isn't it infuriating??? LOL, I'm sorry that Puck's driving you kind of bonkers...I'm afraid it might actually get worse before it gets better? BUT REST ASSURED, IT WILL GET BETTER. I promise!

I also apologize for the late response. School's been keeping me busy lately, and I've been admittedly awful at keeping up with all this lovely feedback. I hope you forgive me!

A fun little heads up though: I'm about to post part two of August, so I hope you're able to check it out! :)

[comeundone]

Conveniently i'm online so I'll definitley be checking it out as soon as you post it! And glad to hear it WILL get better haha! :)

[of_hearts]

LOL, keyword: eventually. ;)

[wander_lust_79]

yes...soo good...their relationship is progessing....he's staying the night...thats huge...I can't wait for more!!

[of_hearts]

It is huge, right???? LOL. Thanks so much for dropping a line! I'm sorry for the HOMG TWO WEEK LATE RESPONSE? Yowza. Things have been super busy on the school front lately, but now that I have some free time, I'm catching up on responses and am about to post part two of August! Hopefully you'll get a chance to check it out. :)

Thanks again for the lovely feedback!

[wander_lust_79]

never worry about not replying right away to my comments...Im cool w it...I just have to leave a comment when I read something I really really enjoyed, like this..I have to letter the writter know they're good, really good!!!! :)

[mvp]

Wow I just read june, july and now this in one sitting maybe i shouldve waited until it was finished because now im desperate for a new one!!!

[of_hearts]

Oh my, then I'm sorry I made you wait so long for the next installation! I know this comment is about a bajillion years late, so apologies for that too-- I've been super busy with RL stuff lately. Regardless...I'm about to post part two of August so hopefully that'll make up for it, LOL! It goes without saying that I'm so thrilled you've been enjoying this series. It's been by and far my favorite fic to write and it's so lovely to know you guys enjoy it too. Thanks for taking the time to drop a line!

[motylik]

Wow. I wanted to kill Puck when he killed the gold fish and flirted with the Cheerio but he redeemed himself in the end. I didn't think he would! Please continue, it's my absolutely favourite summer Puck/Rachel fic ever! :D

[of_hearts]

Please continue, it's my absolutely favourite summer Puck/Rachel fic ever! :D
THIS IS SO SWEET! Don't worry, I'm most definitely continuing. I'm sorry for the delayed response to your lovely feedback; I've been going a little crazy with papers and work and the end of the academic year stuff, but just know that it totally made my day! I can't even begin to tell you how happy it makes me that you've enjoyed this story. It's so much fun to write and has kinda become my baby, haha. And thanks for being patient as I've slowly made my way through it-- I'll be posting the next part of August tonight, so I hope you get a chance to check it out.

Thanks again!

[motylik]

Your welcome. And no problem, I'm patiently waiting for any fic updates. My life is so crazy I can barely read them anyway. I read your newest update yesterday! It was awesome. :D :D But I don't remember if I replied or no. LOL Puck needs an ass kicking though.