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of_hearts

win some, lose some - part three: august (2/3)

May 24, 2010 23:06

Glee. 7,228 words. Noah Puckerman; Puck/Rachel.

The summer after Puck's junior year, picking up where we left off in August: Finn comes home and something changes.

For previous chapters: JUNE ( 1/1), JULY ( 1/2, 2/2), AUGUST ( 1/3)

A/N: So sorry for the ridicuously long wait for the second part of August! I'm going to be out of town for a bit, so ( Read more... )

ship: puck/rachel, genre: fluff, multi chap: win some lose some, character: noah puckerman

Comments 87

nade2008 May 25 2010, 16:47:43 UTC

Oh my gosh! this story is ridiculously amazing. You've made me fall in love with everyone of the characters. Oh Puck/Rachel please get it together! Bam - i just want to hug him, bless him bestfriend vibey self! Sad this fic is ending but cant wait to see how the last part comes together!

of_hearts June 8 2010, 05:58:20 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm thrilled you're enjoying this crazy ride and even more thrilled that you took the time to drop me a line and share your thoughts. I agree, dude, I just want to pull Bam into a giant bear hug. And yes, the fic is coming to a close soon, but don't worry, I have a one-shot follow-up planned to post not too long after I finally get part three up.

Thanks for reading and I hope you enjoy the rest!

smc_27 May 25 2010, 17:04:52 UTC

Oh my godddd. This is SO GOOD. Honestly. I want to read new chapters of this every single freaking day for the rest of my life. So get on that, okay? :P ( ... )

of_hearts June 8 2010, 05:55:46 UTC

You are so sweet!! Thank you so much for the lovely feedback...I've said this to a couple other people I think, but I swear, long comments are like my CRACK. I know I take forever and a day to go through and respond to everyone, but I really mean it when I say getting feedback as thoughtful and personalized as this is just the best part of my day. I'm so glad you like it!

I want to read new chapters of this every single freaking day for the rest of my life. So get on that, okay? :P
OMG LOL I WOULD TOTALLY DO THIS, AND MAY ACTUALLY NOW THAT IT'S SUMMER. I at least have a good chunk of June to keep writing, so I'm hoping that I'll get part three and the (cough cough) sequel to this (it'll be a one-shot) out soonish!

And I'm not one of those people who gets mad at authors for things like, you know, plot...development...Ha!LOL I'M GLAD. Even though I kind of got mad at myself for it, haha! IDK, like I said to someone else on here, a part of me wanted to just keep this suspended in the lulzy summer fun/sexy times stage forever. But ( ... )

mvp May 25 2010, 17:15:46 UTC

you are an amazing writer but i did not enjoy this at all!!! why why would you do this!! It is mean and cruel !!! You better not make me wait forever for part 3!!!

of_hearts June 8 2010, 05:49:25 UTC

I'm sorry you didn't enjoy this. DDD: I was out of the country for a week, so I haven't been able to finish up part three, but I'm working on it as we speak so you should hopefully see a new chapter floating around soon. All I suggest is sticking through with it to the end, and hopefully I'll make up for some of the pain and suffering I put you through. Although part three of August will technically be the last part, I am also going to be writing a follow-up that will be posted shortly after. I hope you decide to give it a chance!

dancing_donut May 25 2010, 17:20:42 UTC

1. You know about the dream that I read this story after 10 years? Well, it might came true because LJ didn't send me any notification about you uploading the second part. So pissed off with LJ right now ( ... )

of_hearts June 8 2010, 05:45:58 UTC

dancing_donut!!!!!!!!!!! I'm so happy you liked this chapter! And as always, ILU so hard for taking the time to leave such a lovely rambly comment (RAMBLY COMMENTS ARE MY FAVORITES: TRUE STORY). You are srsly aces.

And I know Bam is so much better than Puck because Bam is not an asshole and he always treats Rachel really great but I'm rooting for Puck.
I am too ;)

TL:DR
NOT TOO LONG, AND I READ IT ALL.

I'm sorry I made you cry!! I promise I will make it up to you, you just gotta stick with the series through the end. Even though it's technically just a summer fic and will end with part three of August, I'm going to be writing a sequel and posting that soon after as well. So there's a bit more to look forward to! <3333

fuzzy_paint May 25 2010, 17:39:48 UTC

I've been dreading this since the picnic - it speaks volumes that I'm torn between Bam and Puck, so excellent job there - and you certainly delivered. Also, you're totally evil for leaving it there (even if my head is trying to come up with ways to fix everything) and I can't wait for the rest of August!

“You two should just get together already,” Puck jokes. Ethan and Bleek exchange a loaded look and Bam just stares at his shoes as Rachel laughs and scrunches her face at Puck. Of course they're the only two that JUST DON'T GET IT. I'm really going to refrain from the rant about stupid teenagers, but god. IdiotsI love the discordant break between Rachel and Puck the moment Finn comes home. (Is it wrong that I want it to stay summer forever? Like, in the moment when Puck and Rachel are finally connecting and reality is just some vague thing in the future?) I love that Puck gets that it's over, even if he's realizing that he doesn't want it to be, even though neither of them get that it doesn't necessarily have to be ( ... )

of_hearts June 8 2010, 05:40:53 UTC

GRANDMASTER FUZZ. I'm sure my million year late comments are nothing new to you, but I still apologize. LOL TRAVEL? IDEK. Anyway, I think I look forward to your comments above all-- they're always so incredibly insightful and heartfelt with a side of lulz...Just the perfect combination. So glad you're still enjoying this. I knowwww, the cliffhanger was a pretty awful move, but it builds suspense, right???? I'm working on part three now, so hopefully you'll have the resolution coming your way soon!!

Is it wrong that I want it to stay summer forever? Like, in the moment when Puck and Rachel are finally connecting and reality is just some vague thing in the future?
IT'S NOT WRONG AT ALL. I WANT IT TO STAY SUMMER FOREVER FOR THEM AS WELL. In fact, I'm pretty close to writing an alternate version dedicated solely to lulzy summer fun and sexytimes. WHO NEEDS PLOT? LOL.

I love the discordant break between Rachel and Puck the moment Finn comes home. I love that Puck gets that it's over, even if he's realizing that he doesn't want it to be ( ... )