two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl, chapter 1

[of_hearts]

Glee. 971 words. Multi-chapter Puck/Rachel, post-Mash Up. Title (in subject line) from Pink Floyd's "Wish You Were Here," and chapter title from Spoon. My brain has been completely consumed by these two, you guys. I'm seriously considering seeking professional help. Oh! And chapter titles = soundtrack, so LISTEN. To the street beat. (Get the

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[of_hearts]

Ahh, thanks dude! I'm so happy you enjoyed it!

[steph0202]

OMG, love the 'Bro Code for Jews' because you know that Barney Stinston is totally Puck's hero.

This is awesome and I can't wait to see where you go!

[manicmarauder88]

I am already hooked. I am such a sucker for Puck/Rachel, but often times I feel like some fic authors don't really get the character voices, and you're already rocking them. Plus, this is great because you're taking the time to address the other relationships and make the Puck/Rachel situation realistic.

Looking forward to the next installment!

[of_hearts]

Thanks! Yeah, I agree-- my biggest pet peeve in fic is when relationships are pushed forward without seeming particularly realistic. If I ever start to stray, please feel free to call me out!

[hariboo]

I can't wait to see where this fic goes. I love your Puck pov and how you're addressing the other ships, bc I agree, it would be unrealistic to write a P/R fic without having them deal with their feelings for Finn and Quinn.

[scullyish]

omfg, so i commented on your other entry with how excited i was about this, but it's so good, i decided it deserved another comment :D your puck is spot on!

[of_hearts]

OMG, your icon is bringing tears to my eyes. I cried so. much. during that scene.

YAY, I'm so glad you like this!! Thanks for reading!