Comments | of_hearts: two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl, chapter 2

of_hearts

two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl, chapter 2

Oct 30, 2009 23:11

Glee. 1,520 words. Multi-chapter Puck/Rachel, post-Mash Up. Thanks for all the positive responses! Really glad you guys liked the first chapter, hope you stick along for the ride.

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2. love underground
-robbers on high street

( Noah, are you trying to say you want to talk about your feelings? / Hell no, feelings are for pussies. )

ship: puck/rachel, fic: post-ep, tv: glee, glee: mash up, multi chap: two lost souls

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munchlettebelle October 31 2009, 04:49:12 UTC

Haha. "Your face" comebacks are among my favorites...

I love your Puck and I'm really interested to see how his relationship with Rachel develops from the friendship they're establishing.

of_hearts November 2 2009, 07:05:07 UTC

Ha, I agree. You basically can't go wrong with a well-executed "your face." And thanks!! I'm having way too much fun writing him.

greydawning October 31 2009, 05:10:45 UTC

Yeah, so I pretty much high-tailed over here as soon as you said "new chapter"...which is a definite :D in my book.

Your Puck...well, can he be my Puck too? ;) Seriously, he is, dare I say it, adorable. And this line made me lol so hard: Hell, he could go to Mexico now and stand girls up, that’s how good he was. XD

of_hearts November 2 2009, 07:05:58 UTC

OMG IKR? I have this really bad habit of writing my favorite characters as basically everything I want in life. Not exactly the case with Puck, but...He's getting close :(

ookawaii October 31 2009, 05:29:07 UTC

totally love the last part! xDD

and & i can say "that's my boy" I’m not trying to get in your pants again - although, for the record, I totally would have if you gave us one more week xDDD

manicmarauder88 October 31 2009, 08:16:04 UTC

Man, I wish Glee didn't have stupid censors to prevent us from hearing Puck's inner monologue, because I predict it would sound just like this (except in sexy Mark Salling voice).

Fantastic chapter! I'm hoping it really will only take Puck a week to get in her pants... Looking forward to the next installment!

pixie180 October 31 2009, 23:20:45 UTC

You use very witty dialogue is my favorite part of this story~ “you’re so gonna regret that when I’m saving orphans with Brad and Angie and breaking records for the most Tonys and Grammys won in the same year.” (Puck didn’t know what Tonys or Grammys were, but he was pretty sure he still wouldn’t care, even if he did.) ~ This is prefect for both of them and very funny to read. Look forward to the rest.