two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl, chapter 3

[of_hearts]

Glee. 1,760 words. I promise things will be start to heat up next chapter! And also, I've kind of started putting together the most amazing Puck fanmix that's meant to complement this-- remind me to post it when this story is completed. My goal is to have it finished before the next new episode. I want this to live forever in the gap between Mash

Comments

[blanche_]

I really like this! Keep up the good work!

[maplelump]

AWWWW!!

Those interactions are completely believable. And you captured Rachel perfectly. She's the only 16 year old I've heard of that uses words such as abhorrent to describe a classic rock band.

Can't wait for the next installment!

[ash_of_evenstar]

I'm really enjoying this, you've really managed to capture both of their personalities, and it's really well written.
I also love the reference to Friday Night Lights, it's one of my favourite tv shows :)

[funkyinfishnet]

Oh it's so adorable and wonderful. The voices are perfection. The details make it so good. Looking forward to where you go with this :)

[munchlettebelle]

So cute! Puck telling Rachel that he has to avoid the park cause he's afraid he might injure small children made me giggle. I like the way that they've gotten used to each other here. Neither of them has really changed their personality, but they've both come to accept and like the other person for who they are. It makes me happy and I look forward to more.