two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl - chapter 7

Nov 14, 2009 11:25

Glee, 3,751 words. So, this is angst with a side of angst with a slice of angst pie for dessert. When I’m done with this, I’ll seriously need to write some fluff or something, because this is getting out of control. I hope I was still able to stay true to the characters and didn’t succumb to melodrama…One of the scenes is kind of a cliché, but I ( Read more... )

ship: puck/rachel, fic: post-ep, tv: glee, glee: mash up, multi chap: two lost souls

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gubeldood208 November 14 2009, 18:59:39 UTC
Um, why do you make me cry? I just want to take this story and wrap it up in a blanket and hug it and never let it go, I love it so. <3

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kimmy_77 November 14 2009, 19:15:24 UTC
i love this story! i'm usually not a fan of angst but i really loved this chapter. can't wait for the next chapter. :)

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hariboo November 14 2009, 19:30:28 UTC
After a beat, his eyes were still closed. "God, Rach, why do you even bother with a loser like me?"

"You're not a loser."

"Yeah, I am."

Babies! *cuddles them* Heartbreaking and lovely all at once. Love this chapter.

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onebrightmoment November 14 2009, 20:14:03 UTC
ahhhhh the angst! it's painful and wonderful all at once. loving this story!

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melonfucka November 14 2009, 20:17:58 UTC
GAH! MY HEART! MY HEART! IT'S BROKEN!

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