two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl, chapter 8

Nov 18, 2009 02:21

Glee, 2,593 words. This was supposed to be my last chapter before the epilogue, but I decided to split it up so I could get something new out before tomorrow’s episode (!!!). So here’s something considerably lighter than the past two chapters to reward you all for putting up with such crazy teenage angst. Will get back on point with plot in the ( Read more... )

ship: puck/rachel, fic: post-ep, tv: glee, glee: mash up, multi chap: two lost souls

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evie_oh November 18 2009, 10:09:07 UTC
awww. As much as I love your angst, this was a nice little change.

"This was definitely not a dream. Dream Rachel let him touch her boobs, but Real Rachel? Not so much (at least not without some convincing)"

"It had been a while since Puck had to fumble for his things as he got chased out of a girl’s bedroom by her pissed off dad. Come to think of it, he kinda missed the excitement. It was invigorating, really, running down the street as a dude threatened to run you over with his car. At least he actually had some clothes on this time."
LOL so hard at both of those parts.

"The worst part about it all - other than the fact that she was totally planning to leave without telling him anything - was that he was starting to actually feel relieved. Sure, he would have given anything up for that kid, but now he didn’t have to. She took the situation out of his hands and though it wasn’t at all what he wanted, now he felt like this huge burden had been lifted from his shoulders. It was such a fucking cop out, he knew, and he felt like such ( ... )

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christiesk November 18 2009, 10:15:59 UTC
I love this story so much *_*

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funkyinfishnet November 18 2009, 11:18:35 UTC
LOL at Rachel's dad reaction. I can completely see that happening on the show. And the ending was so sweet and soft and quiet. I love how you write Puck's mindset and his growing awareness of how Rachel affects him. I truly cannot wait for the final chapter and epilogue :)

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bridget_grey November 18 2009, 11:34:31 UTC
this is one of the best PR stories around. if not the best!
i love it sooo much! <3

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musical_jay November 18 2009, 13:28:06 UTC
I re-read all the chapters before I read the newest one, just because you are that awesome.

This chapter definitely made my morning! I love, love, love your Puck. Thank you for the dose of happy this time around, I really enjoyed the tender wake-up scene and the subsequent chaos, and the last line in this chapter just killed me. I cannot wait for the final chapter and the epilogue :D

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