Comments | of_hearts: two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl, epilogue

of_hearts

two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl, epilogue

Nov 30, 2009 21:12

Glee, 3,727 words. I like happily ever afters. So sue me.

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EPILOGUE

10. king of the rodeo
-kings of leon

( So, as it turned out, baseball season was totally Rachel’s favorite time of the year, but she didn’t realize it until May hit, Glee ended, and suddenly her afternoons were all blue skies and birds chirping; Noah smelling like leather and freshly cut grass, tasting like sunflower seeds and grape Big League Chew bubblegum (her favorite). )

ship: puck/rachel, fic: post-ep, tv: glee, glee: mash up, multi chap: two lost souls

Comments 42

musical_jay December 1 2009, 03:11:23 UTC

*happy sigh*

I love, love, love how he calls her B when he's drunk. Seriously, that's the cutest thing ever.

And le makeup sex? Awesome, because I can totally see it happening.

I'm so sad this is over, but this was beautiful.

of_hearts December 1 2009, 06:29:31 UTC

Thank you so much for all your amazing comments, not just now, but since the beginning! I apologize for not responding to each individually-- I've been/am crazy busy lately...To the extent where writing this story definitely shouldn't have been so high on my list of priorites, but COME ON, IT'S PUCK AND RACH. Anyway, I just wanted to say thanks, and don't be too sad! When I post my ficmix for this, I'll probably include some little drabbles (or at least I will try to!) so hopefully you'll have something to hold you over!

Also...It goes without saying that much fic will need to be written in the four month hiatus we have to suffer through until new episodes in April. Heaps and heaps of it!

gomez23 December 1 2009, 03:15:39 UTC

Oh, that was fantastic. The whole series was great. I enjoyed it very much and thanks for writing it for us!

of_hearts December 1 2009, 06:31:02 UTC

Honestly, it was my pleasure, I didn't realize how fun writing these two would be! And it made it even better to know that you guys enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it. Thanks for the kind words!

anonymous December 1 2009, 03:22:47 UTC

I cannot tell you how much this made me laugh-- ACTUALLY laugh (out loud!). Your tone is perfect for these two and I am SO sad this story is over! It has definitely been one of my favorites.

Also? This line is made of all kinds of AWESOME:

"Plus, New York was kick ass and he and Finn were pretty sure they saw a prostitute, which was obviously fuckin’ awesome."

SO, so dead on for high school boys and what would CLEARLY be the highlight of their first trip to NYC. It just sums up why this epilogue was (to use Puck's voice) SO FUCKING PERFECT! :-)

Can't wait to see what you write next.

of_hearts December 1 2009, 06:33:22 UTC

So I'm guessing you won't be able to read this since you commented anonomously, but still: thank youuuuuuu, it makes me so happy to get such nice comments from you guys! Especially when they're about things like tone/voice because it can be really hard to find that balance outside of the straight up dialogue. So yes, thanks!! And be sure to check back here in the next week or so, I'll try to post my ficmix along with some ficextras (deleted scenes if you will-- haha, I'm so lame) which should be fun!

jacqueline_n December 1 2009, 03:56:54 UTC

UGH! Love it!

AND*click* Follow

of_hearts December 1 2009, 06:35:36 UTC

Yaaaay! I'm so glad. :) Also, your comment about that Shaq/Conan GIF? I TOTALLY AGREE, I died when I saw it the first time.

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of_hearts December 1 2009, 06:39:37 UTC

That's so kind of you to say; thank you so much! I definitely hope to write more, as long as my TV ADD doesn't kick in (which I'm not expecting any time soon...) but after this ficmix + fic extras (likely some snippets/drabbles...Sort of like things we didn't get to see in the story itself) I don't think I'll be posting any multi-chapter fics in the immediate future. I'll likely stick with one shots or drabbles, just because I have a crazy couple of months ahead of me.

Anyway! I'm sure that's a lot more information than you needed to hear from me. Thanks again for your comment!