Comments | of_hearts: its all gonna break

of_hearts

its all gonna break - one shot

Dec 08, 2009 22:03

Glee. Puck/Rachel one-shot. 4,008 words. R for language and vague glimmers of other things, but I don't write smut, so. Yeah. Sorry?

I got the itch to write something before Sectionals comes and shakes up my Glee world view, so this is basically a haphazardly compiled story chronicling what I think should have happened/should happen between Puck ( Read more... )

glee: hairography, glee: mash up, ship: puck/rachel, glee: sectionals, fic: one-shot, tv: glee, glee: mattress, fic: missing scenes

Comments 26

ellashy December 9 2009, 10:25:41 UTC

aww this is love..
great great fic

anonymous December 9 2009, 11:16:08 UTC

I liked it very much!! Especially the character writing. :) So well done!

haydn_hottie December 9 2009, 13:58:28 UTC

What can I say about this? Well, perfect. Yup, that’s pretty much the only thought that comes to mind. Puck is just…ungh. He turns my brain into mush. Once again, you’ve managed to leave me completely floored with your writing. Keep it up.

hariboo December 9 2009, 20:34:44 UTC

THERE ARE SO MANY THINGS IN THIS FIC THAT MAKE ME HAPPY. I'M JUST GONNA COUNT THEM OFF:

a) He would pretend he didn't give a shit and wasn't listening, but the truth of the matter was that he totally was listening, and the things she said really bummed him out. -- he LISTENS.
b) He dropped his hands down to her waist then lifted her up onto the step behind her. His fingers grazed the sides of her thighs and he laughed up at her. ; He slid his hands up the sides of her thighs, under her skirt then took a step closer. Without thinking, she wrapped her arms around his neck and his grin was gone; he pressed his face against her abdomen, planting a kiss on the satin material of her shirt. He felt her fingers messing with his mohawk and he smiled. -- the images that mind conjures up here. HOTNESS SQUARED. God damn, how fricking amazing are these two together. And then it was followed up by Puck thinking Rachel's a badass (WHICH SHE SO IS) and thinking it's equally hot.
c) "Night, babe. Love you."-- She called him, he called her. HE ( ... )

of_hearts December 10 2009, 05:45:27 UTC

UM I THINK WE MIGHT BE LONG LOST GLEE TWINS, FOR REAL. AND I LOVE YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS COMMENT, SERIOUSLY. LOL sleepy confessions of love...I'm so glad that didn't come off as too cheesy! I mean, it wasn't like he was purposefully being all, OH RACHEL WACHEL I HEART YOU, it was like, this is my natural talking-to-my-girlfriend-sign-off and it's usually girlfriends he's talking to nearing 3 AM. EXCEPT THIS TIME IT WAS RACHEL, GET IT???? Hahaha, I'm so lame.

Rachel choses Puck. FULL CIRCLE, BITCHES.
HAHAHA MY LOVE FOR YOU IS SERIOUSLY OFF THE CHARTS. I can't wait til you watch the episode and read my reaction post!!!!!

BTW WAIT HEY YOUR ICON? I NEEDS TA HAVE IT.

hariboo December 10 2009, 11:46:31 UTC

HELLS YEAH, GLEE TWINS!

It wasn't like he was purposefully being all, OH RACHEL WACHEL I HEART YOU, it was like, this is my natural talking-to-my-girlfriend-sign-off and it's usually girlfriends he's talking to nearing 3 AM

EXACTLY. It was just the NATURAL REACTION HE HAD TALKING TO HER. Puckeron, why so hot!?! I can't wait to see the ep and read the post. I sure I'll have many, many thoughts. I mean, I don't expect MUCH, but I'll take anything for these two. ANYTHING.

Icon: is of my own making, feel free to snag away.

munchlettebelle December 10 2009, 04:37:18 UTC

Oh this was so excellent! I loved it to bits and pieces. And did you see the look between Puck and Rachel after she talked to Quinn tonight? Significant! ...I think. Anyway, I loved Puck and Rachel's voices in this and the way her annoyingness just kind of gets into his heart somehow. So perfect!