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[of_the_beast]

I don't care what you English fuckers say, "Destroy everyone and everything!" is a fucking legitimate poem and deserves better than a fucking F.

IT'S BETTER THAN THE GAY SHIT ABOUT THE FUCKING SAKURA PETALS FLOATING DOWN THE RIVER OR SHIT LIKE THAT.

Comments

[unbroken_green]

It may be a legitimate poem, but it certainly deserves an F.

sakura...

[of_the_beast]

No it doesn't, 'cause it's fucking awesome.

[unbroken_green]

You might think it's "awesome" but it doesn't really have any literary merit.

[of_the_beast]

I wasn't going for any literary shit.

[crimsonscourge]

I think that's a great basis for a poem!

[of_the_beast]

FUCK YEAH IT IS.

[crimsonscourge]

It would be better if you added something about bloodshed and civilians screaming in agony, however.

[of_the_beast]

...think that "Destroy everyone" pretty much covers the bloodshed shit, and shit about screaming in fucking agony oh shit there goes my fucking arm would sound really fucking emo.

[erant_lupus]

... How moving.

[of_the_beast]

Fuck poetry, anyway.

[erant_lupus]

Right.

I'm just surprised you're going to school at all.

[of_the_beast]

FUCKING SCHOOL BITCHES AND THEIR CATTLE PRODS.

[you_suck_potter]

Keep at it!
Maybe your poetry skills will one day be 'A' material!

[of_the_beast]

The generally accepted view of poetry's for fags.