*giggles* It's awesome! So well done and I could see it happening in my mind perfectly. I liked hos John noticed things like the french book and I liked how Sherlock looks for John being angry or not and I just loved how they settled in the end for a evening with one another :)
Aww This is sweet. It's adorable that Sherlock really is just trying to help even though it comes off a bit abrupt and he doesn't like her. And that she clearly had that speech memorized and practiced and barreled on even after he interrupted.
God, I can actually hear Sherlock's annoyed drawl when you have him saying, "You're thinking of The Mask of Zorro".
I'm quite certain that you're only person who can get me to read fic that isn't NC-17.
I loved this. You've done an incredibly good job of capturing their personalities. I also laughed quite a bit. The, "But you wouldn't sleep with him." was great.
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I liked hos John noticed things like the french book and I liked how Sherlock looks for John being angry or not and I just loved how they settled in the end for a evening with one another :)
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God, I can actually hear Sherlock's annoyed drawl when you have him saying, "You're thinking of The Mask of Zorro".
Good job, and excellent story.
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That's just sooooooo wonderful!
I haven't even finished reading yet, and I'm already in love!
Thank you so much!!!
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I loved this. You've done an incredibly good job of capturing their personalities. I also laughed quite a bit. The, "But you wouldn't sleep with him." was great.
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