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The End of The Beginning XIV

Jul 14, 2009 08:39

Title: The End Of The Beginning
Part: XIV
Title: Breaking glass can sound like heaven
Pairing: Xander/Spike (eventually)
Overall Rating: NC17
Chapter Rating: PG13
Beta: shakatany (champion)
Disclaimer: Joss is the be all and end all.
AN: Little bit more angst, in case you didn't get enough in the last chapter.
AN2: The North Wind Doth Blow

Previous Chapters

( Chapter XIV )

x/s, spike/xander, spander, the end of the beginning, xander/spike, s/x

Comments 23

blackeyedwicca July 13 2009, 23:21:59 UTC

♥

Love.

off_suit July 13 2009, 23:55:16 UTC

^_^

whichclothes July 14 2009, 00:48:46 UTC

Oh yay! Big hugs to Spike for being there when Xan needed him. And to Xan, who just needs hugs. Beautiful chapter.

off_suit July 14 2009, 00:51:22 UTC

Everyone needs hugs, especially Xan. Poor boy.

devo79 July 14 2009, 01:12:29 UTC

That is some of the strongest writing I've had the pleasure of reading in a very long time.

off_suit July 14 2009, 01:27:58 UTC

*toes ground* Aww shucks.
Thank you =]

shakatany July 14 2009, 01:27:01 UTC

The "boil" has now been lanced. Let the healing commence.

Shakatany

off_suit July 14 2009, 01:28:25 UTC

*g*
Working on the next chapter now. You should get it in a day or so. Hope you don't mind the fast pace. =]

shakatany July 14 2009, 01:49:43 UTC

Not at all. Bring it on.

Shakatany

novalinx July 14 2009, 02:06:49 UTC

That was very sad.

Poor Xander.

Poor Spike for having to do that to him.

And really, only in Sunnydale could someone scream in a cemetery and have no one come to help. At least I hope it's only in Sunnydale.

If it was me, it would probably take more than a few sentences of "Dawn really does need you" to make this all better. I imagine it might be the same with Xander.

But, dude, very sad. It may sound odd, but congrats on writing it so well! And now I need a cookie.

Thanks for sharing, happy writing, update soon please!

Tabee :)

off_suit July 14 2009, 02:59:43 UTC

I almost feel bad for the bleached wonder, but he's doing good, so I'll bake him cookies when he feels bad.

Oh it'll take more than "it's ok" to make Xander a happy donut boy again, but he'll get there eventually. You've get to see Dawn's blow up at him being all zombie-like yet.

Thanks for letting me know I wrote it right =] I always worry about angsty bits in case I make them too over the top and unbelievable.

Still writing away, new chapter soon =]