that's something i'd call constructive criticism. Definitely something you could work on..so no worries! he obviously has a high opinion of you, or he wouldn't bother, would he?
also, I LOVE AMONG SCHOOLCHILDREN!!!!! It's in my favorite books on facebook even lolz.
If that makes you cry....nigelgodrichJuly 31 2007, 02:31:06 UTC
Then I guess it's a good thing you didn't try and get into the journalism school. The first few stories were averages along the range of...oh...D's and F's. for the first five weeks of the course. And those comments were terribly brutal.
Besides, babbling on and on isn't a flaw you can't fix. All you have to do is pick and choose. Economy of language, dear.
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also, I LOVE AMONG SCHOOLCHILDREN!!!!! It's in my favorite books on facebook even lolz.
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Besides, babbling on and on isn't a flaw you can't fix. All you have to do is pick and choose. Economy of language, dear.
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