[fic] Conches Calling, Curtains Falling, Summer's Coming Home (2/2)

[ofolivesnginger]

Author ofolivesnginger
Fandom: EXO
Pairing: Kris/Luhan, mentions of Kris/Lay and Kris/Kyungsoo
Rating: R
Words: 11,556
Summary: The mailman’s almost here with the bad news: Kris Wu with the literal broken heart of 7839 East Sablefish Drive has a new boyfriend. He’ll be here with the news...any time now...

Comments

[lafeaux]

wowowow i was going to spazz at you at how freaking perfect and awesome all of this was, and how at times it was really amusing but also borderline angsty and how some of the parts made me go T____________T particularly this line!!!

“Knock knock.”

“Who’s there?”

Not me, Luhan thought after a minute.

BUT THEN I READ THE ENDING AND IT'S 2AM AND I CAN'T STOP LAUGHING OH MY GOD I ACTUALLY CAN;T BREA THE THIS IS THE BEST OMG

Little Prince Lou, smiling his sweet smile, slid the eggs out of the pan and under Kevin’s nose, and as he watched him bleed onto his own shoulder trilled in his honey voice, “you totally deserve that, m***********.”

A+++++++++++ IF THIS IS YOUR IDEA OF AN ABOMINATION THEN YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE PLEASE AND THANK

[ofolivesnginger]

omg hello there and thank you for spazzing!! oh my gosh I’m usually quite terrible at endings and was especially worried about how anticlimactic this one was but i guess i’m glad you liked it?? hahaha uuhh

thaNK you for reading this thing and leaving me with your thoughts!! <3

[kfangirl4]

This was lovely. I adore the idea of Luhan as a surfer boy with a job that keeps him outdoors but still gives him time to surf. Loved the scene with the drunk moms at the bar. Thank you so much!

[ofolivesnginger]

Thank you dear! And you're very welcome, I'm happy you enjoyed it c:

[stelevol]

This is really perfect just wow. You deserve a hug for writing KrisHan.
Loved how it started out a bit angsty and then ended all sweet/hilarious. And that one line that made my heart clench:

“Knock knock.”

“Who’s there?”

Not me, Luhan thought after a minute.

What Lu Han did was super cute, but then his thoughts gahhh.

And Kris writing short stories of their romance is just so adorable, Romanticismo Galacttico 7 is wonderful, it pretty much sums up their relationship.
Really LOVED the towel kiss scene and that whole beach scene of them tumbling and holding hands and just sorting everything out.

BTW the epilogue is ridiculously adorable.

Thank you so, so much for writing this!

[ofolivesnginger]

Ahhhh thank you for the hug <3 I think everyone involved in the krishan business should get a big hug, just a big group support hug because wow /krishan/. I could totally see Kris writing, since he allegedly reads all the time. Glad you liked the towel scene because I realized after publishing that it may have gotten a little too anime, oopsie. Anyway!! Thank you for reading and commenting!!

[hipployta]

It is totally your fault for cutting Luhan off for no reason Kris...I'm glad you are aware of that

And...aww...unrequited love broke Kris' heart but Luhan, completely letting him in, put it back together

[ofolivesnginger]

ahh haha, well, he did have a reason, it was just a very bad one ;) thank you so much for reading and commenting!

[dui_zhang]

;________; first of all 11k of Krishan. bless you.

i loved this. even though it was angsty at first it ended cute and happy and cries a lot

and i won't be original and will too quote this part:

“Knock knock.”

“Who’s there?”

Not me, Luhan thought after a minute.

because ow, i felt that and it was just slkgjlsglsgsdggss

also side note that has nothing to do with the krishan....CUTE at Jongin's mom attacking Kris

Jongin’s mom almost drops her drink, actually swatting Kris pretty hard on the arm. “No way, you lucky bastard! Oops, I shouldn’t--”

cause Jongin is always hitting people when //he// laughs and it was a tiny small detail that idek if you did on purpose or not, but it was just cute to think he got that habit from his mom.

gklfgsl ok this was wonderful, thank you for sharing <3

[ofolivesnginger]

hello jess *blows kiSSES*

was it really angsty?? i didnt think it was angsty when i wrote it omg but then i guess im immune to pain to a certain level now that i probably dont feel it oop. also omigosh everyone is quoting that one line lol did you know i was this close to not even putting it in there

and no i diDNT DO the mom thing on purpose but now that you mention it oMG

very welcome ma cherie <33 et merci beaucoup aussi