[fic] Heart in Your Mouth
Author ofolivesnginger
Fandom: EXO
Pairing: Kris/Luhan
Rating: NC17
Words: 8391
Summary: Among the fan gifts is a ring box, amid the ring box is a torn up picture, and along the way somewhere we all had to cut our losses.
A/N: I couldn't stop thinking about relationships that go down the drain due to bad communication, and got to wondering why there's no talking ( Read more... )
Fandom: EXO
Pairing: Kris/Luhan
Rating: NC17
Words: 8391
Summary: Among the fan gifts is a ring box, amid the ring box is a torn up picture, and along the way somewhere we all had to cut our losses.
A/N: I couldn't stop thinking about relationships that go down the drain due to bad communication, and got to wondering why there's no talking ( Read more... )
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Interesting story...not enough KrisHan out there
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Kris thinks he’s crying, but he can’t be sure. “You know what I did, Wu Yifan,” he says, still holding his face in his hand. “I spent five hours. I sat there on the floor for five hours, waiting for someone to come stop me.”
O L I V E .....that part right there, just got to me and i had to stop and BREATHE and roll around my bed screaming and then BREATHE again in order to keep reading.
I am just ;;
and then
“If you won’t do it, then just don’t come back the next time. You know what, I was actually going to say--you should get over me, Kris.”
Kris stares. His chest is so tight he can’t pull the breaths to speak.And i was like YOU LIAR YOU SAID YOU WOULD NEVER BREAK KRISHAN. But at the end you fixed them and I am so sorry this comment is just be ( ... )
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god teenage lu is the death of me because can you imagine??? if he's bad at communication now, back then with the whole teenage hyperawareness of the bro code of conduct there was just so little the fratbrat could say re: his tru feelings.........and he was already such an image god i just. only one he can hope to get him is kris and he waited but kris gave him the opposite of what he wanted and all security lu felt from knowing that kris and him thought alike was shattered when he didn't pick up on this one??? fRICK. yeah man i was gonna break them with luhan being the realist for once but nope. i do make him cry all the time tho its fun lol
thank u bb ;-; i try
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thank u 4 read
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i hope you don't mind me quoting your fic back at you. i'm just really bad at commenting coherently i only know how to respond and flail to scenes (=><=)
“The past is the past and it doesn’t matter to me anymore, I’m a man with a tough heart now, people from the past are dead to me.”
fic started off with this and it is harsh. at this point we don't really know the nature of their relationship but even without knowing luhan's words are sharp and if it's possible for them to cut even us one can only imagine what it does to poor kris. and i guess thinking that is bad enough, but later on when we see that kris has been doing these little things ( ... )
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“Not bad. Good luck.”
“What?”
“What? I said--I mean, what else can I say?” But Kris knew he could say more. Things like I really do believe you’ll succeed no matter where you go.
all. my. feels.
luhan is waiting for someone to tell him to snap out of it, for someone to care enough to say that he's making the biggest mistake of his life and that he shouldn't give up on his dreams, that he still has a chance. but kris doesn't tell him that because he really believes that luhan will flourish no matter what he decides to do and he just means i'll support ( ... )
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