The Vongola Throne 14: Hook, Line, and Sinker (Part B)

Feb 09, 2009 18:44


Title: Hook, Line, And Sinker Part B
Author: ofphenwa 
Summary: Reborn goes fishing.
Note: Aaaaand here's part B!

Hook, Line, and Sinker Part B )

the vongola throne, reborn!

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renuki February 10 2009, 05:35:48 UTC
Ho ho ho ho!

The meeting between Yamamoto and Tsuna is going to be freaking awesome. :D *cackle*

(AND YEY! You continued! *dance*)

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anonymous February 25 2009, 05:29:19 UTC
God. Just- ILU.
I've just read through all fourteen chapters straight, and frankly I am amazed at the complexity of your universe, how you are developing the characters (since they seem to differ slightly from the canon!version).
The pace is relaxed and not rushed, but not too slow as to cause frustration. The storyline is, again, very intricate and well within character of the series, with original flavor added.
You win the internet <3

-Lurking lurker who lurks.

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ofphenwa February 26 2009, 22:50:27 UTC
Thank you very much for the kind review! It certainly lightened up my day during what seemed to be the hardest week in my life. I'm glad that you find the pace engaging as this is one of the aspects that I find difficult to balance - (There are many exciting twists and turns ahead but I can't reveal them too early without proper character development! However, there are some clues lying around if you know where to look.) Haha, yes, this AU is quite complex when really, it all started with one simple idea. And following that, the characters will be *different* from canon due to the circumstances in their new lives but not so much so that they're unrecognisable from the people we know in canon. This is yet again, another difficult aspect to manage. Once again, thank you very much for the review and I hope that you will delurk more in the future! :)

Ofphenwa

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