The Vongola Throne 15: Cambio Di Stagione

[ofphenwa]

Title: Cambio Di Stagione
Author: ofphenwa
Rating: PG13
A/N: Thank you readers! I'm amazed by how popular this story is becoming, judging from the increasing number of faves I receive on ff.net. By the way, this story will be updated on lj for now as I'm no longer able to access ff.net due to network restrictions imposed by the uni wifi I now use. I

Comments

[winkyo_o]

Nice nice!!! An update!!!

Love Bianchi's opening, love how you showed her coolness in the story and her protectiveness over Gokudera. And Gokudera playing piano... Love~~

And finally Tsuna meets Yamamoto *clapclap*

Cant wait for more, how the meeting will turn out =)

[ofphenwa]

That was fast! Thank you for your feedback. :) I spent a great deal of time on Bianchi since I was half-torn between thinking "Oh no, is she a Mary-Sue?" and "YEAH, this is awesome!" So I'm happy to see that you still think she is in character. Well, Tsuna and Yamamoto's meeting will certainly be interesting, seeing their history and who they are now...

[oh_lordies]

I read all 15 chapters in one go, ahaha. I shall stalk this forever.

/dead from procrastination

You are awesome.

Yes.

Awesome.

Wah, I really like your style, flow & concept. Basically everything. I suck at reviews. Mmhm. [I shall have great lulz when the rest of the guardians come into play. Great lulz indeed.]

[ofphenwa]

Wow! 15 chapters all at one go! That's a lot of reading there. I'm flattered that you took your time to read it and that you enjoyed it. :) Well, well, I do hope I'll meet your expectations.

[lilac_ayame]

Aww, I've been following your fic in FFnet. Nice to see this continued :D

[demoerin]

Over from going through hitman_reborn, and you don't know how happy I was to see this fic updated.

I love Bianchi, and I love her interaction with Dad. It's so formal it's freakish, in a way that fits the fraught family situation well. Oh, one thing, it's a little odd that Bianchi refers to her brother as "Gokudera Hayato", as that's the Japanese way of ordering names, isn't it? I think Italians would go with "Hayato Gokudera". (Speaking of names - I like "Petit Oriole"; it's a sweet stage name for a jazz singer. It just reads a little oddly to have her described as "petit" and then immediately afterwards to have her name revealed as the same.)

The way Don Amaranta flips out at the end of the scene also feels fitting. He must have passion in him, considering the whole affair business.

I'm looking forward to Yamamoto's past getting explained. The moment seems to be getting closer and closer.

[ofphenwa]

Thank you for your feedback. :) I'm happy that you enjoyed my interpretation of Bianchi and her interaction with her father, given that the father hasn't really shown up yet in canon. I was actually quite anxious about this part

[demoerin]

I hadn't even remembered that she always talked about Gokudera like that in canon. Never mind that, then. I like the idea that she might be doing it as a sign of respect for his heritage.

Oh, I didn't mean that her real name should be revealed right there. I was trying to say that while Petit Oriole as a name works for me, the repetition of the word 'petit' seemed odd. I just think another description would make it flow better? But ignore me if I'm being too nitpicky.

[ofphenwa]

Thank you for your claification. I think I can understand what you mean by 'petit' disrupting the reading flow but yes, it's a matter of personal preference.

BTW, chapter 16 is already out. ;) I look forward to your generous feedback, if not, at the very least, do enjoy the update. :)