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Tonight we throw ourselves away

Feb 07, 2012 23:56

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lenaf007 February 9 2012, 18:14:35 UTC

Took me a little bit to come up with this. Work always seems to get in the way of writing for me. :P ( ... )

beforeskylines February 10 2012, 11:49:03 UTC

I really like how you've weaved a whole story with so little. I can clearly see a timeline here, a more adventurous, fierce character that started off in the beginning, and then the slight ware with came with the realization things might not work out. I almost wanted to dig my fingernails into my skin at the end because I could just feel everything weighing down on your MC so sharply.

lenaf007 February 10 2012, 15:32:53 UTC

Thanks! Yeah it could almost be in two parts - the spy work up until the war ends (her side losing), and then the second part is her just trying to break loose from her spy work and going home. I'm glad you liked this, and that it got under your skin like that.

I guess that's a good sign, right? haha