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JongKey ficlet

Feb 11, 2009 00:22

Title: Love, not like oxygen
Pairings: Jonghyun x Key
Rating: PG
Genre: Light angst
Wordcount: 483
A/N: No names are mentioned but I wrote this thinking of JongKey. You’re free to chose who’s the 2nd person POV focusing on.

Summary: It’s not a weird, lame attempt at suicide. You just want to know how long.

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fanfic, jongkey

Comments 18

musikq February 11 2009, 02:49:27 UTC

SPOT! SPOT! SPOT!

musikq February 11 2009, 02:50:49 UTC

GAHHHHH. jongkey <3

you know i <3 jongkey! hehe. awwww this was so well written and heart breaking? noooooooooo dont break jongkey :( LOL.

when you were writing this, whos POV were you writing from? 8D

oh_god_key February 11 2009, 09:24:19 UTC

*hugs* Aw thanks for reading dear ^^ I was in the mood for a little angst but nooo I will never break JongKey apart. They're not really broken here, it's just one of them realizing how bad they need the other.

I wrote this on Jonghyun's POV, but I think it works for Key too, doesn't it? XD

musikq February 11 2009, 16:49:58 UTC

thats good D:

i wrote/posted jongkey. and like i promised, i dedicated it to you. its FAIL-Y unfortunately :(((( the words got all stuck and jammed.

the world can do with MOAR jongkey

samedi_matin February 11 2009, 13:06:17 UTC

oh...this was so...OH.

i like how it's like the need for love supersedes that of oxygen. it's so..GAH!

i'm not really a Jongkey fan, but it's fics like this that...ahh, even chisels a soft spot for them in my heart...oh so cheesy of me XD

oh_god_key February 11 2009, 16:01:29 UTC

Aw you make me so happy with your comment ^__^ ♥ And even more happy that you're not a JongKey fan and yet you've read this! I hope that the next fics I write will get JongKey into your heart each time more ^^/

samedi_matin February 11 2009, 20:58:34 UTC

hahahaha, dooooooonnn'''ttttttt

paper_rainbows February 11 2009, 14:45:04 UTC

HOMGZ. D: JONGKEY! 8D oh oh oh ive got a fic for you, but its not smut:D the smut is erm, IN THE PROCESS? just go and read the fic and you will know. its in my fic comm! :D please join~! *HUGS*

oh_god_key February 11 2009, 16:03:02 UTC

*glomps* I've missed you around ♥

AW RLY RLY?? OFF TO READ RIGHT NOW!!!! *____*

paper_rainbows February 16 2009, 14:56:38 UTC

GAH. I WAS BORED, SO I CAME HERE. AND I KEPT GRINNING LIKE A PEDO. ILU:D ♥

oh_god_key February 16 2009, 16:15:34 UTC

*glomps you again* >o<; ♥

But why were you grinning like a pedo?? HAHA

Feel free to come here when you're bored but get used to the glompage 8DD

Thread 5

annabel92 February 11 2009, 17:13:27 UTC

oh, my sad sad heart :(
so so so amazing and I can just see Jonghyun/Key doing this, and the way you described it - oh, it's like I didn't get it as soon as I read it but slowly, as I went through it more, I started thinking about it more and, guh, this is just what I need in a story, you know?
The ending was immense - it's like, I don't know how you suddenly got there, but it was just, great, y'know?
I could go on but basically, you need to write more JongKey, really :)
♥

oh_god_key February 11 2009, 18:02:29 UTC

Omg *blushes deeply* You have managed a huge, HUGE smile on my face right now. Thank you like so much! I'd be already ultra pleased that you took your time to read it - yeah it's short but still - but leaving a comment like this completely melts my heart!

You can definitely wait for more JongKey from me because I love them so so so much ♥ I only hope they'll be at least enjoyable to read~^^;

annabel92 February 12 2009, 18:05:07 UTC

I like to think I please as much JongKey fics please me :D
comments like above are nothing considering I rely on writers like you haha xD
keep on going! I'm sure your fics will be fine :D

jecca_o9 February 11 2009, 18:08:46 UTC

love is not like oxygen. At least, yours is surely not. If it was, you two would share it just like the air that surrounds you,
This is an interesting way to look at it. ♥. I've always taken love like oxygen as you can't survive without love, but this took it to a whole different level.

I love the ambiguity of this. I can think of any character and the story would somehow fit.

oh_god_key February 11 2009, 20:05:35 UTC

I'm glad you found it interesting! When I caught myself thinking about this, I thought that it was a big contrast between the way we use to think of love being like oxygen and the perception of it that I was having then. I don't know if it's because it's very different, but I'm kind of liking this idea more lol But then again, both are true enough and I make pretty much no sense haha

And it makes me a tad worried but I know one can imagine just anyone when reading this, but I hope people will be loyal to JongKey when reading it ♥