"Jeff Buckley Wails"

Nov 08, 2007 14:04

Just a poem, not completely based on anything, partially based on lots of things. hehehe. Hope you enjoy.
My music is turned up
as I sit head in hands.
You’re so angry you’re calm,
so every word lands.

Keys from the table-
you’re ready to leave.
Tears gleam in your eye,
wiped to your sleeve.

Pause at the door,
And your breathing is wrong.
Right here sat your ( Read more... )

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oh you... flyingstalins November 9 2007, 00:18:17 UTC
and your continuing fruitful artistic skills.

just do me a solid and lay off the mojo pin.

(I'm trying to clean and organize but am really conflicted about whether or not I should empty out the PF office box.)

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Re: oh you... green_hill_monk November 9 2007, 16:21:48 UTC
I can dig it,
that jeff buckley tho
I think His distant clansmen Bill is sexyer

anywho
I am cleaning my room
and decided to take down
all my little pictures and clippings
off the walls and replace it
with a large van goeh poster
which marshall and I may pick up today
anyway
I tok down a folded piece of paper
which has on it a 2 color whatercolor
of me made by you when sitting crosslegged
outside the tv studio in the fal of 03
I cherish it
truely.

my artistry

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jessieduck November 9 2007, 01:10:17 UTC
interesting.
I like it. It created alot of different images when I read it:
You turn the knob slow
but you swing the door fast.
Leave flames behind you,
leave a wreck where you’re past.

Slam pulls me up-
I collapse to the door,
eye slides to the peephole-
I fall to the floor.

I sit for an hour.
The music’s still on.
As Jeff Buckley wails,
I know that you’re gone.

Those are my favorite lines.

p.s. regina spektor is a good thing :)

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