50 Shades of Grey: Chapter 18 and 19

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Comments

[laurahonest]

wow that is some sexy sexytiemz there. jesus has the author never actually had sex? *headdesk*

[xfortytwo]

Oh yes, it's wildly sexy XD

Actually, I have a terrible feeling this author has been trying out everything she's writing about for ~research~which just makes me really, really uncomfortable.

[xfortytwo]

hahaha and she says 'oh my' so often. And I never fail to hear it in his voice, which just makes it really, really absurd XD

[tunnels_of_loce]

These have got to be some of the worst sex scenes ever. Seriously. D:

Also, thanks to you I think I will ALWAYS read, "Oh my!" in George Takei's voice!

[xfortytwo]

they're certainly up there. I mean, I'm sure I've read worse in the sense that I've read more horrifying ones and quite a few that have no grasp of anatomy, but these scenes are just so boring I can't even. Beyond boring.

lolol you're welcome.

[xfortytwo]

hhahah her stupidity is definitely unintentional XD The author keeps trying to make her seem so smart by like...quoting Shakespeare (hdu).

hahaha yeah, the overuse of Jeez is .... really odd. And combined with stuff like 'oh my', it's just really, really weird.

[scatteredintime]

LMAO WHAT

[xfortytwo]

hahahhahahahah those were basically my reactions as I was reading.

and the Shakespeare thing. At first I LOLed irl cause it was so ridic. And then I was angry because how dare she.

I still love how he shouts through clenched teeth XD

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