LJ Idol Week Four - Woken Up Like An Animal, Teeth Ready for Sinking.

Apr 06, 2014 09:09

It's too hot in the sauna, I need to get outside, need a moment alone. It's one of those ethereally misty afternoons where the fog hangs over the lake and the pine trees drip with moisture. It's quiet at the Lodge at beginning of April, students won't be showing up for another week or so and for now there are only the few staff members who are ( Read more... )

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eska818 April 7 2014, 05:03:27 UTC
Still reading, still loving your way with words. :)

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ohelectricshock April 10 2014, 15:15:39 UTC
Thank you so much, that means so much to me <3

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swirlsofblue April 7 2014, 12:46:06 UTC
Absolutely adore your use of description and descriptive imagery, it's so potent.

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ohelectricshock April 10 2014, 15:17:10 UTC
Thank you! I am glad that it worked :)

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halfshellvenus April 7 2014, 21:06:46 UTC
I see that this is a glimpse of a brief moment where you had acquired hope that this all might work, that there could be something that defied your fears.

I'm sure it was fleeting, overall, but it's nice to become part of that hope even for a little bit.

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ohelectricshock April 10 2014, 15:18:39 UTC
Yes, you understand exactly. Things are about to get pretty tumultuous in the world of past!me. It feels significant somehow that I'm writing about it all almost exactly a year (to the day) later.

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beautyofgrey April 8 2014, 00:27:36 UTC
This is beautifully written - it definitely conveys the sense of personal strength you felt in that moment.

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ohelectricshock April 10 2014, 15:18:53 UTC
Thank you so much! I am glad that it translates :)

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belenen April 8 2014, 05:23:27 UTC
mmm, I like how you tell stories <3

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ohelectricshock April 10 2014, 15:19:23 UTC
Thank you so much <3

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