Comments | ohheypunk: FIGURE ME OUT. I DARE YOU.

ohheypunk

FIGURE ME OUT. I DARE YOU.

Apr 28, 2005 22:36

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carly anonymous April 29 2005, 03:23:33 UTC

Fuck you, perfect asshole poet

deadcapulet April 29 2005, 05:57:15 UTC

figured it out, good stuff. i am particularly fond of this line:

"its so common to the common, the public, the sheltered, the shaded, the wasted, the hated, the dead."

the rhyming and assonance is awesome.

aviathemp April 30 2005, 05:13:14 UTC

as i told you in school...

i read it and i like it...a lot.

sunday kissmegently14 April 30 2005, 15:38:30 UTC

i wrote a poem in a minute and 40 seconds go check it out hahahah it's so overdramatic on purpose lol im in a good mood, hey you're comin down tomorrow but have a good time with yas n cass ok? enjoy zeh river!