Yabeki - chapter 11 part 1

[ohime_chan]

Title: Yabeki
Author: Ohimechan & Aiko
Pairing: Jin/Kazuya, Tomohisa/Kazuya, Ryo/Uchi, Shige/Koyama
Characters: X Group: Nishikido Ryo, Yamashita Tomohisa, Koyama Keiichiro, Kato Shigeaki. Y Group: Akanishi Jin, Kamenashi Kazuya, Tanaka Koki, Nakamaru Yuichi. Still in no group: Kusano Hironori.
Disclaimer: General Disclaimer and stuff.
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Comments

[didikoishi]

Wonderful chapter ♥___♥
They are meant for each other and being together they would get their happy ending!!!

Just a little note about these passage:
See, Tomohisa wasn't completely inexperienced - he didn't have nearly as much under his belt as Shige or Ryo, but he didn't compare in sheer virginal innocence to Kei either. He'd had girlfriends before, and a grand total of one boyfriend (he'd even forgotten the guy's name).
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She'd walked in on things like this before (okay, once) and had just closed the door and left.

O_O I'm a litte confused because in chapter 6 you wrote Now that he thought about it, he'd practically had his first kiss stolen from him!, referring to the kiss they shared the day at karaoke. Didn't you?
I am sorry for being such a prick :p

Thank you for providing my everyday dosis of PiKame! ;D
(^3^) *chu*

[aikowritesfic]

By 'things like this' in that bit, I meant more the whole having another person in your bed sort of thing, y'know? Aaaand dating people doesn't necessarily mean you kiss them. XD Yay I am confusing~!

[didikoishi]

Thank you for the explanation *bows*
I like a lot how Tomohisa and Kazuya ended up to feel for each other in this fic. They are so in love! *melts dreamy*

[ohime_chan]

They are! ... *mutters something about chapter 20(? something like that)* please remind them~? ^^v

[sunnycat_]

omg! it was so painful in the beginning and so bittersweet later... so i'm almost speechless ^_^

they two are totally in love and life is totally terrible. i'm afraid smth bad might happen :(((
they really should run away ^^ to Australia like Jin's mom did xD

thank you for this great chap.
can't wait the next one. please update soon, ne...

[rubypurple]

PiKame rabu!!! ♥

I love the drama... omg... i'm so addicted to this fic right now along with WOWF...

arrghhh... i know we'll have some more drama in the future coz no one knows about this relationship yet...

but i'm gonna be happy for the fluff right now... ♥♥♥

[shuwei]

Uwah, that was so long but worth it...my iTunes is getting really creepy lately when I am reading fics. It started playing a really sad song about "fate" XD And when I read to the part where Pi was standing above Kame with the umbrella, the song goes "It's a destiny that couldn't be in this life. So the next time we meet, don't let go again." I ALMOST cried. This is a really great chapter...