How Not to Impress a Host [Chapter 1]

Oct 14, 2011 23:51

Title: How Not to Impress a Host [Chapter 1]
Pairing(s): Donghae-centric. Donghae/Eunhyuk; side!Han Geng/Heechul and Yesung/Sungmin
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance, Friendship, a fair bit of Angst
Disclaimer: Contrary to popular belief, no one owns them.
Warning: Mild language and mature themes.
Summary: Donghae knows that ‘getting smitten with a fair- ( Read more... )

pairing: yesung/sungmin, fanfiction, genre: angst, genre: romance, pairing: han geng/heechul, genre: friendship, pairing: donghae/eunhyuk, rating: pg-13

Leave a comment

Comments 32

shin_ah_mi October 14 2011, 16:46:00 UTC
great start...can't wait for more!!
HAEppy birthday to ur friend...

Reply

stripedrainbows October 15 2011, 12:30:44 UTC
Thankyou! heh i feel like i'm butting in but i just had to say thanks to you too! ^^

Reply

ohmygeng October 16 2011, 06:02:50 UTC
I'm glad you thought so! I was scared that it may have been too draggy for a first chapter. :<

^^

Thank you for reading and commenting! :D

Reply


mata7ashita October 14 2011, 18:05:24 UTC
Ooh, a continuation! (and I didn't even have to wait long 8D)

Haha, Brian Joo as the boss, wonderful xD
Hanchul bickering is just too funny ^^
I don't mind the slow pace, it's feels more natural that way...

Well, I'm curious about the rest, so do your best =D
(lol, that rhymed)

Reply

ohmygeng October 16 2011, 06:19:43 UTC
Indeed! XD Considering that this fic is practically five months overdue... OTL

Is it? Lol! I admit, I don't really know Brian Joo that well. >.< I don't think people ever imagine HanChul without any form of bickering. :'D I'm glad you think so; this was supposed to be only six chapters long, but I wanted to expand it even more. :>

You'll learn more about the other characters in the later chapters, if I'm competent enough lol. Thanks for the support! ♥ You have a knack for rhyming, it seems? XD

Thank you for reading and commenting! :D

Reply

mata7ashita October 16 2011, 18:25:22 UTC
Me neither, I mostly know him from a clip a friend sent me...
I loved his attitude xD (maybe you already know it =p )
The Great Brian Joo!

Yeah, lol, you're right, it would seem rather strange...

I don't care how many chapters there are when a story is good/great
Don't worry, you're competent enough! 8D

Lol, did I do that one before? Cause I can't remember xD
And yes, I put a lot of thought into that one!

Reply

ohmygeng October 17 2011, 02:46:20 UTC
I always knew that he was hilarious, but this is just. LMFAOOOOOOOO. He makes a better bitchy girl than me. I don't know whether to be impressed with him, or be disappointed with myself. OTL Thank you for the link! :D

Well...Considering that this fic is the beginning of the whole verse (the two-shots are discounted lol), it makes more sense to expand it now. ^^

Then I hope to live up to your expectations! :> Feedback is always appreciated as well!

I'm almost certain you do, but I can't remember and I can't find it either. OTL I apologize.

Reply


tesa11 October 14 2011, 18:47:17 UTC
interesting....wait for more!!!^^

Reply

ohmygeng October 16 2011, 06:20:49 UTC
Glad you thought so! ^^ I'll try updating frequently; once a week, I hope! :>

Thank you for reading and commenting! :D

Reply


paradigm_twist October 14 2011, 19:24:51 UTC
Oh HAHA. \O/ You know I went for about 7 hours without the internet? And on a day when I'm actually home the whole day too OTL The internet only came back just right when I was heading out to work *bangs head on table* Took me awhile to clear my things before I got to this ><

BUT~!

Already loving it. Donghae is already my bias and his little throbbing headaches at everything in the club is just endearing. I feel you guys man. Waitressing is also a thankless job. I am lucky and thankful that most of the Aussies actually acknowledge you whenever you come up to the table to clear it or whatever :) But you meet awesome people like Yongwoon and Hannie! So that makes up for the thankless moments.

LMAO at the mask depiction. I am trying to imagine Yongwoon in one and its just @__@ Suddenly reminded of the time Yesung wore a blue mask during one of the SS3 concerts. Gorgeous <3 ( ... )

Reply

ohmygeng October 16 2011, 06:35:58 UTC
Only when I'm on a holiday can I survive being away from the internet for so long. :<

I'm glad you're already liking it! :> Donghae and his whole wide-eyed approach to the club is sort of like a staying thing; unless it starts to get too grating, I guess... I can't do that; I pretty much need recognition. :/ Aha, well, that is pretty much a staying thing in the fic as well. (:

I was thinking of doing up a whole characters list, with links to the masks they all wear, but I'm not at that stage yet lol. XD I'm lucky that the shades part makes sense here lol. Yesung did? *Googles it* ...KIM JONGWOON, YOU ARE AFTER MY HEART. ;A;

Heechul is just epic, as usual. 8D

Well, it's a given; this whole fic verse started off with YeMin, lmao. I wasn't exactly forward thinking when I wrote the two-shot, so you can take this HaeHyuk fic as the start of the whole Masquerade verse. ...Kinda sorta. :< Yep! ZhouRy, KangTeuk, KyuWook; they'll all have their own fics ( ... )

Reply


harhar12 October 15 2011, 07:16:11 UTC
spot.

Reply

ohmygeng October 16 2011, 06:37:45 UTC
To make up for the lack of YeMin in this chapter (and some of the following chapters as well):


... )

Reply


Leave a comment

Up