Fic: Introduction to Artificial Harmonics and String Theory [Community - Jeff/Annie]

Apr 23, 2012 18:21


Title: Introduction to Artificial Harmonics and String Theory
Characters/Pairings: Jeff/Annie, (With a splash of Troy/Britta)
Rating: R for some colorful language
Word count: 4,130
Disclaimer: I do not own Community, Annie, or Jeff. Considering installing a Dreamatorium in my apartment, though. Still waiting on the building permits from those riverboat ( Read more... )

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sinecure April 24 2012, 07:28:31 UTC
Lovely work. Beautifully written and so angsty. I'm in love with angsty fic, and this fandom just screams for it. I wish I could write it as well as you.

Fantastic job. :)

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ohmyohpioneer April 27 2012, 04:13:54 UTC
Daw, thank you, thank you! Angsty fic is my kryptonite - and the depth of this fandom and these characters means that the angst is particularly acute and poignant. These are two characters who feel deeply, who can really be mined psychologically.

(And PLEASE. Your fics are some of my absolute favorites of the fandom. And also your Doctor Who fics, actually. When I stumbled into the Community fandom and found you here as well there may have been an actual squee involved.)

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sinecure April 28 2012, 04:16:31 UTC
Yep, I'm trying to psych myself up to writing super angsty stuff... and have a bit. But. Ya know?

Oh, thank you! *blushes* A fellow DW-er, awesome. *blushes some more* Seriously, thank you. You've just made my month. :)

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wallows April 24 2012, 15:42:48 UTC
Wow. This blew my mind. You deftly maneuvered the transitions as the characters transform, and the character's complexities through dialogue. It reveals this sad and revealing interaction between all of them. And part of me wishes the ep did end this way ; )

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ohmyohpioneer April 27 2012, 04:18:40 UTC
Ohh me too. I dream(atorium) of a world in which there are Jeff/Annie kisses aplenty. ;)

(And thank you so much for your kind words!)

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wordybee April 24 2012, 16:11:18 UTC
I know this fic is amazing because I'm leaving a comment and my crippling shyness really only allows me to leave comments for fics that are amazing.

I hope you write more because, for reals yo.

(Another reason why I don't leave comments might be the use of phrases like "for reals yo." I'm stupid. Ignore me, but accept my love of this piece of writing.)

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ohmyohpioneer April 27 2012, 04:23:14 UTC
Oh you lovely person, you. You've got me all smiles now. I am so glad you took the time to read and my heart thanks you for your getting the courage to review!

I'll keep writing if you keep reviewing!

(I use the phrase "cool beans" in everyday conversation and give people the thumbs up unironically. So we may be kindred spirits.)

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fangirl_101 April 24 2012, 17:44:07 UTC
Your use of imagery and description blows me away--this was so incredibly well written I can't believe it's your first time writing these characters. It's like you've lived them! You know their ins and outs and complexities and crippling insecurities. Well done--such an amazing fic. I really do hope you write more J/A because one taste wasn't enough. I'm addicted! *adding to memories :)

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ohmyohpioneer April 27 2012, 04:26:53 UTC
Oh gosh, those are probably the biggest compliments you could give. These characters are so dear to me - and Annie in particular I constantly relate to - that I want to really do them justice.

Thank you so, so much. :)

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kbisthebest April 24 2012, 18:51:13 UTC
This was so amazing.

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ohmyohpioneer April 27 2012, 04:27:45 UTC
You're amazing! ;)

(And thank you!)

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