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Aug 01, 2012 23:53

It's that time again!


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skylinehorizon August 4 2012, 12:27:37 UTC
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Dean lets the phone drop to the floor and grabs the front of Sam's shirt with one hand. "Sam? It's okay. It's okay. We're gonna be okay."

It's really fucking not okay. Hold it together. Keep breathing. Look after Sammy.

Dean pulls himself forward along the ground, grits his teeth at the feeling in his leg, but keeps going until he's close enough to see the sticky blood in his ears and the shallow, fast, fast, fast, intakes of breath. He brings a shaking palm up to rest gently over his head, and pulls it away with fresh, warm blood coating his palm. "Sam?" he chokes out, gently shaking him. "Can you wake up, Sam? Come on, little brother. Wake up for me."

The ambulance is taking too fucking long and Sam isn't waking up and there's blood, blood everywhere. His leg feels like it's shattered and Sam, Sam isn't okay. He's really not okay ( ... )

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kettle_o_fish August 4 2012, 17:33:27 UTC
Oh man, that hit the spot so well! Thank you!

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skylinehorizon August 4 2012, 17:41:36 UTC
I'm happy you think so, and I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

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tarotgal August 6 2012, 18:02:39 UTC
I have ALL the feels now!

I love this mantra of Dean's:
It's really fucking not okay. Hold it together. Keep breathing. Look after Sammy.

Sam latching onto Dean's voice. Dean keeping him alive. Dean desperately willing the ambulance closer for Sam's sake. A beautifully written, emotional scene.

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skylinehorizon August 8 2012, 12:44:34 UTC
Thank you so much, I'm glad you think so :)

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greeneyes_fan August 11 2012, 23:26:24 UTC
Oooh, this is intense.

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skylinehorizon August 12 2012, 13:03:48 UTC
I'm glad you think so, thanks for saying so!

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