Happy Birthday, Sammy! - a commentfic meme

May 02, 2016 00:12

In honor of our dear Sammy’s 33rd birthday, we’re hosting a comment fic and art meme!


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steeplechasers May 2 2016, 19:52:32 UTC
On his thirteenth birthday, Sam is desperately sick and close to death; Dean's alone with him in Bumfuck, Nowhere, and Dad is nowhere to be found.

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FILLED: Bad Creek Fairytale crowroad3 May 3 2016, 04:07:41 UTC

Sam: all cusp and sinew, light risen on May and he’s running, along the drive to the creek, where tangles of green lose his ankles quick, and Dean finds a pool, trout and tannin, and they risk, laughing, leeches for birthday fish.

*

Dean fries them up, cracks a beer. Wraps library-lifted tales from three towns ago.

No neighbors near. Honeysuckle and kudzu, and Dad an interstate gone, path of a thing with no name.

He’ll be back, Dean says, lets Sam sad-smile, nearly arch, older than yesterday.

Dude, Dean says, tosses the kid a can.

Roughhouse the dusk away. Fireflies.

*

Couch. Shackhouse bumped by bats, an owl.

They sleep on the same sheet, TV sorry and low.

By midnight Sam is dog-days, one sweat away from nothing, mumbling Dean’s name in hot pants.

Jesus, Sammy, what is it.

Sam’s eyes lift to blank, go back, black; spine stiffens like line and pulls, screams taut.

*Dad ( ... )

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RE: FILLED: Bad Creek Fairytale steeplechasers May 3 2016, 04:18:42 UTC
Oh damn. This is breathless. Thank you so much!

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RE: FILLED: Bad Creek Fairytale crowroad3 May 5 2016, 01:51:58 UTC
You're so welcome! Love the tense, evocative, time-and-space-and-state specificity of the prompt. <3

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RE: FILLED: Bad Creek Fairytale lennelle May 3 2016, 08:28:58 UTC
Gosh this was beautiful!!

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RE: FILLED: Bad Creek Fairytale crowroad3 May 5 2016, 01:52:22 UTC
aw, glad you liked!

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RE: FILLED: Bad Creek Fairytale madebyme_x May 4 2016, 16:02:13 UTC
So beautiful! You captured Dean's desperation perfectly.

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RE: FILLED: Bad Creek Fairytale crowroad3 May 5 2016, 02:01:34 UTC
glad you thought i got some of the desperate in there!

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