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Riptide 1/ lennelle November 3 2017, 13:20:20 UTC
Um I ended up not liking this so much once I'd finished it. But it's written, might as well post. Hope you like it anyway ( ... )

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RE: Riptide 2/3 lennelle November 3 2017, 13:21:54 UTC
He's not sure how long it's been. There's no night or day here, and whatever's left of the sun hangs high in the sky endlessly, hot enough to burn his exposed skin. Sam's feet are turning numb, his legs getting heavier and heavier as his stomach cramps with hunger. He rubs his hand under his shirt, feels the flatness of his belly as it growls to be fed. He feels at his ribs, wonders if he can make out the markings etched there.

Lucifer can't find Sam as quickly if he didn't see which way he went.

He needs to rest, he needs to keep moving. He pauses, contemplating taking a break for a moment, when something moves at the top of the valley, sending a stream of rubble tumbling down to him. He stops breathing for a moment. He found me he found me he found meSomething else comes hurtling down towards him, and he's so relieved it isn't Lucifer that he forgets a little too late to draw Ruby's knife. It's a demon, the black eyes are a dead giveaway, but the horns are definitely new. It barrels into him, sending him into the ground and ( ... )

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RE: FILLED: Riptide 3/3 lennelle November 3 2017, 13:22:05 UTC
He wakes up in motion and nearly throws up all over himself. He turns to the side and hacks up a nasty string of saliva. Now that he thinks about it, he doesn't remember when he last ate. The movement stops and Sam realises he's stretched out on something like a sled, wedged between tin cans and ammo ( ... )

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RE: FILLED: Riptide 3/3 caranfindel November 3 2017, 17:15:20 UTC
I LOVE THIS.

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RE: FILLED: Riptide 3/3 lennelle November 5 2017, 00:26:07 UTC
Oh yay! Thanks :)

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RE: FILLED: Riptide 3/3 lennelle November 3 2017, 17:24:28 UTC
(OP here) Ooh, this is great! I love that even through the terror Sam kept himself together enough to get away and make a plan. thanks so much for the fill!

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RE: FILLED: Riptide 3/3 lennelle November 5 2017, 00:27:44 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm relieved to hear you like it, I was feeling a little unsure about it as I posted it. It didn't turn out how I imagined it in my head. Even so, I quite like the idea of Sam and AU!Bobby having adventures together.

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RE: FILLED: Riptide 3/3 crowroad3 November 5 2017, 05:22:03 UTC
Packs a punch. <3!

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RE: FILLED: Riptide 3/3 lennelle November 6 2017, 13:23:27 UTC
Oh thank you! :)

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RE: FILLED: Riptide 3/3 quickreaver November 6 2017, 07:52:13 UTC
Oh, so many lovely turns of phrase, how could I NOT love this?

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RE: FILLED: Riptide 3/3 lennelle November 6 2017, 13:23:39 UTC
*blushes*

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RE: FILLED: Riptide 3/3 amberdreams November 6 2017, 14:41:19 UTC
TBC, right? I love the idea of Sam building something new with AU Bobby, and that AU Bobby is even crustier than our Bobby. Who'd have thought that was even possible? LOL

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RE: FILLED: Riptide 3/3 lennelle November 6 2017, 15:02:16 UTC
Sam and AU Bobby would have a very interesting relationship indeed! Now I just need regular Bobby to meet his AU self

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RE: FILLED: Riptide 3/3 madebyme_x November 7 2017, 14:52:29 UTC
Yes! I love the idea of Sam in the AU world trapped with Lucifer and I loved seeing Bobby and how he teemed up with Sam at the end! Wonderful! :)

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RE: FILLED: Riptide 3/3 lennelle November 7 2017, 17:41:56 UTC
Thanks! :)

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