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[ohsecretsecret]

Author: ohsecretsecretRating: PG

Comments

[bloodanna]

It's short, but it definitely packs a punch and that's the whole point. I have to say I'm amazed at how well you managed to get Mohinders voice in this, even in the third-person narrative.
This is just gorgeous and utterly perfect.
Hope to see more from ya. :)

[ohsecretsecret]

You have nooo idea how thankful I am for your comment! I feel better. I get really self-doubty when it comes to fiction.

[tiptoe39]

Yes it is perfect. You are exactly right. :-)

[ohsecretsecret]

Gosh, to get a compliment from you on a fic is like if I drew a picture and Da Vinci was all, "Hey that looks nice." I'm all blushy.

[veetvoojagig]

That's lovely. Getting so much across in so few words is difficult. I'm impressed.

[crystal_lily]

Awwww I loved this!

[ohsecretsecret]

The scene in your icon is really what inspired me!

[redheadedali]

Aw - that last line is great.