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Nov 09, 2007 14:59

Author: ohsecretsecretTitle: Repetition ( Read more... )

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tiptoe39 November 9 2007, 21:30:52 UTC
:dies:

Oh my god. The desperation. The passion. Oh god. I am so warm all over. I am glad nobody can see my face here at work....

:reads again:

This is fantastic....

:ded:

I want to be able to write like that.... no fair.

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ohsecretsecret November 9 2007, 21:38:52 UTC
Umm is that a joke? I am like a little baby fic writer and you are like the master! I pretty much bow to you!

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tiptoe39 November 9 2007, 22:20:09 UTC
Um, no, that is not a joke....

:still ded:

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ohsecretsecret November 9 2007, 22:56:21 UTC
Oh no! Please don't be too dead to write 20 more first kiss stories!

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newkidfan November 9 2007, 23:03:41 UTC
That was absolutely lovely. *hugs the fic*

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xandri November 9 2007, 23:44:19 UTC
*flails* YAYE

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redheadedali November 9 2007, 23:59:24 UTC
He’s in love with his baby daddy. He’s part of a baby mama drama

Best. Description. Ever. :)

And excellent fic all around.

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ilsaluvsrick November 10 2007, 01:18:59 UTC
This was fanfuckingtastic and now you can never, ever leave fandom and I demand you write fic always!

Things I lurved:

-Mohinder has ruined Matt for all others! Yeah, if I was going home to that every night I'd probably never look again either.

-Matt's list having subpoints

-Momo being Matt's baby daddy. And the Jerry Springer fantasy. And that Mohinder dreamed about it. Just all made of so much win.

-That poor little Mohinder thought Matt was going to ask for a divorce and they'd have to split custody of Molly

-The kiss and the closing line which I totally did not sniffle at like a big ol' sap.

Going with the story theme:love, love, love, love, love, love!

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ohsecretsecret November 10 2007, 01:51:37 UTC
I couldn't leave this fandom if I tried, I think. It's so ridiculous that I cannot write a short story to save my life and so I renounced my creative writing major.. but I can write fanfiction for ambiguously gay characters. Great.

Considering you've written some of my absolute all time faves, I'm all blushy and giggley right now over your comment.

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ilsaluvsrick November 10 2007, 03:23:54 UTC
I know exactly what you mean. I have never been good at anything remotely creative and had accepted that as my lot in life. And now I'm writng fic all the time and the words just pour out and I can hear the characters in my head.

That's either a beautiful story of inspiration, or I'm losing my mind.

I find I don't really care which.

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ohsecretsecret November 10 2007, 03:34:48 UTC
I can hear them in my head too! It helps that I think like Matt and talk like Mohinder naturally, I think. That's why I love them so much. I don't relate to ANY of the other characters on Heroes, but I am seriously 50% Matt and 50% Mohinder.

I'm a naive, overtrusting, smart, arrogant, black-and-white thinker with a preoccupation with doing the "right" thing (Mohinder). I'm also sweet, ruled by my emotions, quick to love, self-sacrificing, chubbster with low self esteem (Matt).

Thus, I adore them.

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