How's My Driving:This post is for comments/constructive criticism about things others like/might not like about Twilight's character and how I write her
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I just wanted to come and say that I really like how you're handling Twilight. Her voice comes through very clearly in all of your tags and it doesn't seem forced - as a character with a wide vocabulary, it can sometimes be easy to fall into the trap of sounding forced and trying too hard to make the character seem intelligent. You're doing fabulously.
Keep doing what you're doing and keep up the good work!
Would you believe I JUST NOW got this notif? Way to fail, LJ. Anyway...
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!
I'm glad you like her; at first I wibbled so much at the prospect, considering she was a brand new muse for me, but I really, really enjoy playing her, especially here. I try not to make her too brainy and snobbish, which is hard sometimes, lolol.
But thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it muchly!
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I just wanted to come and say that I really like how you're handling Twilight. Her voice comes through very clearly in all of your tags and it doesn't seem forced - as a character with a wide vocabulary, it can sometimes be easy to fall into the trap of sounding forced and trying too hard to make the character seem intelligent. You're doing fabulously.
Keep doing what you're doing and keep up the good work!
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THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!
I'm glad you like her; at first I wibbled so much at the prospect, considering she was a brand new muse for me, but I really, really enjoy playing her, especially here. I try not to make her too brainy and snobbish, which is hard sometimes, lolol.
But thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it muchly!
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