cognizant.

Mar 18, 2004 22:57

your resilience
to opposition
makes me think
you have the
boyish charm
that makes you
cringe in my
face

i desperately
want you to
feel my words
but you
push the
air away.

the neurosis
of the
quiet coma
attacks only
when i
am awake
it pumps
like cyanide
in my veins
and makes
me scream
into the
dark.

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cmonkeysrshrimp March 18 2004, 21:37:56 UTC
i like the words you used. they sound....appealing together if that makes sense. which im sure it doesnt, but yeah. i like it.

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cinematic_end March 18 2004, 21:47:56 UTC
i know whats good for me.

<3
i love your poetry.

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chainsoffreedom March 19 2004, 02:12:03 UTC
interesting stuff (vegetables)

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Whoah hyperjesus March 30 2004, 16:52:55 UTC
Hey Wendy, that's a good poem. I like the part about cyanide. So... ummm............ uhhh......... are you crazy? 'cuz I am.

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Re: Whoah cowfish March 30 2004, 19:45:43 UTC
Crazy people never know they're crazy.

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Re: Whoah hyperjesus March 30 2004, 21:27:54 UTC
you don't understand... I know the difference between right and wrong; I'm not a psychopath. It's just that... I see people, and all I want to do is cut their fucking throats open, or shoot them, or kill them some other way... but I don't think it's wrong... infact, I know it's right... but a whole buncha otherpeople think it's wrong... so I realize that they think I'm crazy... See?

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p.s. hyperjesus March 30 2004, 16:56:21 UTC
oooh, look at me... no little freakin' camera, or b/w picture of my face up close and personal... "yeah, I'm so depressed and stuff I have to be smashed against the camera and in black and white... 'cuz that's who I am deep down inside the darkening hell that is my soul..." what the hell am I talking about? Good poem.

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