daffodil

Aug 30, 2004 21:06

brisk walking
in the rain
makes my
tiny head
spin

like an
aphrodisiac
used up
much too soon

I see faces
staring,
but they don't
mean a thing
to me

I swallow
your pill,
and then they
mean everything.

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... mizrebelle August 31 2004, 05:24:42 UTC
...and this is beautiful; i actually sang it.
it's a beautiful, sad, funny, lovely song.

(my sleeping-pill is kicking in; i swear it's not the"drugs" talking.)

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brokslilbrit August 31 2004, 19:59:04 UTC
ohhh very symbolic.

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