Comments | okaeiri: (05) peculiarly, there is a lack of oxygen only around me. (part ii)

okaeiri

(05) peculiarly, there is a lack of oxygen only around me. (part ii)

Apr 16, 2013 15:00

woohyun/sunggyu
dystopia!au
r
4388 words

( Sunggyu has forgotten how to talk. Woohyun just wants to hear him say his name. )

fandom: infinite, type: fic, pairing: sunggyu/woohyun

Comments 25

dapdaphaex April 17 2013, 01:42:32 UTC

omggg it was beautiful ;n; i really love these types of fics LOL they speak wonders about hope and stuff /shot

No really, thanks for sharing, it was a good short read to keep me going with school work xD

okaeiri April 18 2013, 17:53:50 UTC

I'm glad you saw some hope here, most people is telling me how gloomy the whole fic is... (it is gloomy, but I also like to thing there's some sort of hope in there)

Thanks for your comment :)

aitsu_kame April 17 2013, 13:11:28 UTC

This is beautiful ;;;; I almost cried reading their exchange of emails because hope seemed out of reach but love prevailed after all :')

okaeiri April 18 2013, 18:26:19 UTC

Thank you :3 I'm glad you enjoyed, but don't cry!

arashi1188 April 17 2013, 13:14:37 UTC

WHERE ARE MY KLEENEX

Gosh, this was so nice.
I was fidgeting with anticipation for the moment of Sunggyu's first words.

Thanks for writing this!

okaeiri April 18 2013, 18:34:10 UTC

No, thank you for commenting! Yeah, that's quite THE moment :3

penny_lane_42 April 17 2013, 14:14:09 UTC

OH GOD THIS KILLED ME DEAD.

I love dystopian AUs, and your world here is heartbreaking and terrible and just perfect for a fic like this. My heart jumped every time these two got a little bit closer, and you did a great job of communicating how much Woohyun yearns for Sunggyu. Everything about this is beautiful and perfect and terrible (in the best way). Thank you so much for sharing!

okaeiri April 18 2013, 18:48:35 UTC

I love them too, and I've read such good Infinite dystropian fics I felt like giving it a shot.

I'm really glad you enjoyed it, thank you for reading and thank you for recommending it on your tumblr too <3

kwritten April 17 2013, 15:00:46 UTC

ughhh

Hihi! Here from penny_lane_42’s rec on tumblr

Kim Sunggyu sounds just like him.
/ugh why is this line killing me dead?

so he’s just an email address in the life of Kim Sunggyu.
Well then…

Nobody under the level C can talk … It’s irrelevant and totally pointless, but he can’t find another way to keep in touch with him..
I love this contrast between his power to speak aloud and finding his way around what is allowed to say what he wants. It’s so poignantly outlined here.

but he gets to learn the almost unperceptive changes in Sunggyu’s mood. And yet he thought level D didn’t have those.
The slow humanizing of Sunggyu is agonizingly well paced. Especially because we assume that the narrative perspective would be “human” - and yet, the more knowable Sunggyu becomes, the more we can see how inhuman Woohyun is; how much of his reality and understanding of the world has left him empty despite his higher status. Lovely.

He is happy on Sunday, Woohyun just knows, although he’s not smiling. He wants to think it is because of him ( ... )

okaeiri April 18 2013, 21:33:24 UTC

How do I even... how can I.... I honestly don't know how to start answering to this. So first of all, THANK YOU <3 For reading and for taking your time to write such a great comment ( ... )