FIC: "What goes up must come down."

[okuribi]

There were fifteen stories between him and the ground, he noticed while tapping his cigarette and releasing clumped ashes over the balcony. Below him, people hurried along, while beside them, cars crawled at the speed of a turtle as the rush hour hit. So many people were out there, but were so occupied with their own lives, he wondered if they

Comments

[melodybutterfly]

Lovely writing, as always! ^^ I loved it!

[arlequin]

Awesome! You know, the Ruki in this fic sounds like how the real Ruki would think.

Great job! *hugs*

[_hakushi]

That was just way too cute for words~ I liked how Ruki thinks so much (he does do that a lot, don't you think?!) -hugs-

You know you're absolutely amazing at portraying him, and don't you. deny. it. I'm onto your lies!o___x;;

Keep it up ne (OR PLEASE WRITE MORE?)~! Nothing cheers me up more than a friendship fic between them <333

[okuribi]

Thank you! (_ _) For your comment as well as pointing that out to me, about my tenses. I seem to notice them, then forget them and--I don't know, honestly. XD I am trying to work my best in trying to keep it to one tense and remain steady with that too. I'll keep my eyes open for that when I write!

And okay. XD I'll do that shortly! ♥ No problem there~.

[cherry_soda87]

Very nicely written. You project ruki pretty well and I really like how it ended.

Cheers~