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Jul 05, 2007 00:12

kangin/eeteuk, fluff
on a stormy night

kangin leans in and smiles. 'i like this.' )

pairing: eeteuk/kangin

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naimu July 5 2007, 07:38:06 UTC
FIRST!!

OH my GOODNESS this is sooo sweet!! i wish i had the ability to write this sweet... my stuff is all too much korean drama...

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okwecant July 5 2007, 21:36:37 UTC
thank you~ i bet your stuff is so great ^_^

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okwecant July 5 2007, 21:37:15 UTC
oh really??? lol i wasn't trying to be like eecommings or anything ^_^ but thank you~!!!

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quaris July 5 2007, 09:21:39 UTC
<3 I hope you don't mind if I start gushing.

I've always liked it when the 'all-lowercase' thing (yes, thing, I fail at word-choosing D:) is employed well. It tends to lend a certain...softer, personal feel, I think, like when one is writing in a diary and it doesn't matter whether you have to write with perfectly placed capital letters and whatnot. <3<3 +really suits this kind of kangteuk moment, where the emotions involved are really tender and vulnerable.

omgIthinkIalsofell in more love because:
heartbeat through his bones and flesh. the small irregularity of it, the fast pace thump thump.

his heart beat softens

*sucker for heartbeat-related description* ...please pretend that didn't sound wrong. D: ...okay nevermind it sounds wrong. ;__;

Aaaah, even though it's not my otp, I really liked reading this. Really, really sweet (not overly saccharine, but a totally different kind which I find that I have a craving for more and more these days). And heartrending too, because like what I said before, the emotions. <3 ( ... )

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okwecant July 5 2007, 21:41:01 UTC
wow thank you so much for this comment!!!

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

i love kangteuk because they're so sweeet! i'm so glad you like it ^_^

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blessedangel13 July 5 2007, 09:21:48 UTC
^^ Cute. <3333 ^-^

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okwecant July 5 2007, 21:41:16 UTC
thank you~~~

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hwaiting_yg July 5 2007, 09:33:34 UTC
Short but it has such sweet feelings portrayed in every loving gesture Kangin does. Besides, I am a sucker for such fics like this. ;D

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okwecant July 5 2007, 21:41:54 UTC
thank you ^_^ i'm sorry it's so short. i can't write long fics lol T_T

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