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okydoky

The 'Everything But...' Comment Fest ♥

Jan 29, 2011 19:54

Okay, let's give this a go... (er, changed my mind about the Valentine Comment Fest... maybe in a couple of weeks? :P)

The Harry Potter 'Everything But...' Comment Fest' ♥

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FILL domani_kiyozuki January 30 2011, 10:29:34 UTC

O.o I don't even know! I blame late nights and coffee
Absolution

Lucius smirked. The boy's resistance was quite endearing. His arse had to be burning from the bare handed spanking he'd received earlier, but not a sound escaped from behind the gag shoved between those sneering lips. It was for the best - it stopped the babbling denials, when Weasley's body so clearly betrayed his silver-tongued barbs.

Lucius nudged his knees further apart, settling nicely between the wide V they made. Weasley was quivering - Lucius pinched the inside of one pre-come slicked thigh, grinning when his companion moaned loudly.

Finally, a reaction."Hush," he commanded, laughing cruelly when he saw the fear and lust sparkling in those dark, dialated eyes. A feeling of power surged through his veins, his blood boiling in anticipation of what was to come. Literally ( ... )

Re: FILL valinorean January 31 2011, 05:15:38 UTC

Mmmm, love the powerplay here.

Re: FILL domani_kiyozuki February 2 2011, 06:55:43 UTC

Aww, thank you! It's a first for me, this rare-pair...

Re: FILL lordhellebore January 31 2011, 19:33:49 UTC

I can definitely see this Percy. Even he needs some time away from being a stuffy Ministry official, and Lucius is the perfect escape.

Thank you :)

Re: FILL domani_kiyozuki February 4 2011, 00:24:31 UTC

Absolutely! A pleasure to write, and I'm glad you enjoy it ;D

Re: FILL geneva2010 February 2 2011, 06:31:54 UTC

Re: FILL domani_kiyozuki February 4 2011, 00:28:02 UTC

Eeeek! This comment fest is just one hot, hot fic after another. Yours is absolutely SCORCHING! Both Percy and Lucius were perfectly in character, and the little power twist at the end was superb. Smearing his tears on his cock! Coming over still-clothed Lucius! OMG . . . Great job!

Thanks! I was very nervous about posting - would anyone understand, would they be squicked by the tears, did I put both wizards in character?! And to hear its scorching, with all the other brilliant drabbles here is... *astounded* ♥

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