RACK UP THE BALLS !! Chapter 9 part 1

Jun 15, 2008 07:22


RACK UP THE BALLS!!       Chapter 9         An Apt Pupil

They slept in one another’s sheltering arms for the rest of the night, total exhaustion both physical and emotional claiming the young brothers. For once they experienced dreamless, visionless sleep content in the total possession of one another, hidden from the outside world.

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violence, nc-17, knifeplay, torture, wincest, dean/omc, bad language, non-con rape, sam/omc

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joyofreading June 15 2008, 13:28:53 UTC
oldbatj June 15 2008, 14:24:21 UTC
Will definitely post the second portion of this chapter before week's end, JOR..... LJ wouldn't take the chapter as written ...TOO LONG

Dean being a guy who needs things proven to him needs an epiphany......Thanks for another lovely review.....

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feather_touch June 15 2008, 14:14:29 UTC
Cherry fizz....I nearly choked on my coffee...ehehee. I loved the waking up scene too.

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oldbatj June 15 2008, 14:27:59 UTC
L, knowing how you love that morning coffee...I'm sorry.....

I just couldn't have Dean sliding so quickly from pain and angst ...to joy and happiness.....It's just not Dean's way...Cherry Fizz or no Cherry Fizz...... :0)

Thank you for sticking with me on this little road to happiness "j"

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feather_touch June 15 2008, 14:29:11 UTC
My pleasure.

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glimmerella June 15 2008, 17:18:22 UTC
Mmm, porn-a-riffic! :) So glad you updated.

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oldbatj June 15 2008, 17:59:48 UTC
Thank you, my faithful little Glimmerella....so glad you liked it.....was going to be much longer but LJ wouldn't allow it ....so now we will have another two postings at least instead of ONE...... "J"

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rocit63 June 15 2008, 17:34:58 UTC
This was perfect! I was thrilled with the last chapter when the boys got together, but I was wondering if it wasn't a little fast for them to fall into each others arm and move on. Dean's fears had to be addressed and having him panic and leave thinking he would be hurting Sammy was a very honest way to write it! Great writing! I can't wait to read part 2 and well worth the wait.

Trust me I know how it is writing and posting stories I've had one wip hanging around for over 7 years now and I still can't seem to get anywhere with it, but I'm moving the end of this month and won't be on-line for at least a month or more maybe I can work on it then and I've had a couple ideas for sn fic we'll see if those go anywhere. Thank you so much for posting this update!

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huntress69 June 15 2008, 19:32:43 UTC
Everytime I see your icon I am reminded that I so need to write the fic where Dean slashes a "W" everywhere he goes.

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rocit63 June 15 2008, 19:58:58 UTC
ROTFLMAO!!! To The Tune of Goldfinger:

He's Winchester, he's the man, the man with the fuck me now smirk! ;)

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huntress69 June 16 2008, 01:40:00 UTC
It's your fault! The Song

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spnfan99 June 15 2008, 18:04:39 UTC
I get excited whenever I see a new section of this story. I love it!!! A whole bunch!!!

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oldbatj June 15 2008, 19:11:52 UTC
I'm sooooo glad to see your review, SPNFAN.....love your stuff too...especially My Pet Dean.......Write some for ME please???

Thank you for being so enthusiastic....made my day "j"

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