Between the Lines - Chapter 6

[oldscarletstain]

Title: Between the Lines - Chapter 6 - Lions Slaughter Gazelles
Characters: Sylar, Chandra Suresh
Summary: Elle and Sylar's relationship examined. Chapter 6: Sylar and Suresh work together to identify people with abilities, and Sylar helps himself to a few
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Heroes does not belong to me. I'm in debt to Tim Kring for

Comments

[disalae]

Yay! Ha, and I even had something to look forward to with the Suresh death scene. Well as you know I think this is coming along remarkably, you have such an attention to detail to things that happened in the show that I had forgotten about, but once you pointed them out to me it makes your story that much richer. Can't wait to see how it all unfolds. Well, I suppose I kind of know already, but I'm surprised to see your take on it ;)

[lemomina]

I missed Elle ,I hope we get to see her next chapter :)

Anywho , i really liked this chapter , though i have two tiny problems with it :1- why didn't Gabriel / Sylar react to the fact that Trever's body wasn't there anymore when he came back the other morning .
2- How could " Christopher " survive Sylar cutting his head open & poking in his brain ?!

Sorry if i was out of line...

I will be waiting for the next update

[oldscarletstain]

No problem, I welcome plot critiques. They keep me on track.

1- I just figured he didn't care about the body. Plus, he reacts to the scene being cleaned up later, and I didn't want to repeat the idea.

2- I got the idea from what the FBI agents say in episode 1.02 about Barstow, and just put my own spin on their vague summary.

The next update wont be for a little while. I was away since early Monday and only got back a few hours ago.

[stefichan]

This is progressing nicely. I look forward to Elle & Gabriel meeting again.

[catyuy]

The poor Walkers.
Loved it