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oldscarletstain

Between the Lines - Prologue

Nov 18, 2009 20:33

Title: Between the Lines
Characters: Elle, Noah
Summary: Elle and Sylar's relationship examined. Prologue: Elle is assigned to Gabriel Gray.
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Heroes does not belong to me. I'm in debt to Tim Kring for creating amazing characters that capture my imagination.
Notes: This is the first thing that I've written in a long time that I ( Read more... )

character: elle bishop, series: between the lines, character: noah bennet, fanfiction, rating: pg

Comments 6

bellonablack November 19 2009, 02:09:34 UTC

I'm enjoying the start of this!!! :-) I think you have Elle's character do.

and you're a good writer. :-)

stefichan November 19 2009, 02:47:14 UTC

I'm very interested in seeing where you go with this.

Great prologue.

I really like your Elle, too. You totally have her down.

Looking forward to Gabriell and Elle's first encounter!

disalae November 19 2009, 04:08:44 UTC

Well, you've got my attention! Can't wait to read the first chapter :)

d_wndy November 20 2009, 03:19:52 UTC

cant wait to read more :)

di_elle November 21 2009, 16:05:34 UTC

Bennett with a look that is 45 percent annoyance, 35 percent disdain, and 20 percent utter loathing

Like your Elle and your HRG, let's see what you do with Gabriel.:)