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olebade

White (Ch. 3)

Feb 01, 2010 14:22

Title: White
Chapter: 3/5
Rating: PG-13(?)
Pairing: Kangteuk
Summary: Colors frightened him, so he got rid of them. But can anyone reintroduce the beauty of color to someone who does not wish to see it? (I know, bad summary)
A/N: I tried to get this up yesterday but my keyboard was being stupid and wouldn't let me type.

( matter what you do, Jungsu, there are some things that you can’t change. )

Comments 16

solitaryanguish February 2 2010, 10:21:59 UTC

this is definitely one of the fics I'm looking forward to every week. very nicely written, the imagery is also good. I'm just saddened with the context in which the members are together ): I hope everything goes well in the end though.. I especially loved this:

A big man stood in the very center of the white house. At first, he didn’t seem out of place. He was wearing a white suit and it looked very dashing on him. He walked towards Jungsu with a smile. When they were a mere foot apart from each other, the man spoke. “Welcome home.” he said. The room’s walls changed to very light lavender as the voice left the man’s lips.

And Jungsu was not afraid.

aww ♥ you go Youngwoon. I love how he takes care of Jungsu so much and I hope Jungsu gets better real soon (:

solitaryanguish February 2 2010, 13:45:09 UTC

oh I just remembered, you might want to post this in the kangteuk :)

olebade February 2 2010, 22:18:52 UTC

Thank you for the lovely comment :) yes Youngwoon does take very good care of Jungsu.

I'm glad you like my story! Thanks for the reading :D (and thanks for the suggestion! I'll definitely check out the comm)

sooma_13 February 2 2010, 19:39:35 UTC

woooooooooooooow this is really one of the best
fictions that i know

thanks for your hard work ..

Plz up date sooooooon

olebade February 2 2010, 22:20:40 UTC

Thanks for the comment.
I'm glad you're enjoying my story!

I'll get another chapter up next week :D

xrosepetalsx February 5 2010, 06:47:19 UTC

Oh I have so fallen in love with your story, I really can't wait for you to add more to it. I love the whole idea, and the name and summary were really what caught my attention.

Idek, I've been kind of craving insane suju for a while now, and all the little conditions with all of them are just kind of making me ecstatic at the same time as sad. What's wrong with Heechul? D: And will you give bits and pieces of what happens to the others? D: I hope you do, though I'm mostly excited to see more of Junsu's progress. Two colors xD <333

13loodyangel February 9 2010, 15:20:09 UTC

Yay, it's really nice fic... and some psychology things you added... thumbd up~~ Please update ^______^d