Without a Word (one-shot)

[olebade]

Title: Without a Word
Pairing: Onkey
Rating: G
Summary: I suppose it started in my sophomore year. I was doing homework early in the morning in the library and looked up. Then I fell in...love?

Comments

[jelliemonster]

SPOT!

[jelliemonster]

High school crushes huh? haha~ this is so cute :D
(and to think it's your personal experience... I was thinking about the right thing the whole time. :D I thought you must have experienced this because of all the 'staring at his back' and 'lucky if I saw his face' things~~) XDD

Kibum being all the stalker he is. wahahaha~ I got kinda creeped out of what he was doing at first, but I totally felt he wasn't that of a stalker at all. I did the same thing too! Not at school though- haha

and I got the feeling that Jinki didn't change his class schedule just because he was afraid he won't see Kibum if he changed it. Like he took the risk to try his luck just to see a glimpse of Kibum everyday :D

I'm totally digging for a sequel!!
I hope there would be? or are you not into that? :(

this is really cute~~ I love the light feeling I had reading this :D

♥

[olebade]

Is it obvious? ^^'

Well I think it's funny that Kibum (and I) think about the consequences of 'stalking' and don't care lol.

I can leave it up to you to imagine what Jinki thought and felt throughout these events because I have no idea. (If the guy whom I modeled Jinki after in this ever kept his schedule because of me, I would absolutely die from happiness)

Looks like there will be a sequel! (three people asked for one so why not! :)

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading!

[geenkey]

THIS. WAS. HAPPENED. TO. ME.....!!!! OMO!!! my high school memories suddenly rush back... oh my god

[geenkey]

ooohhh... sequel please..... :)))))) *grinning like an idiot*

[olebade]

haha, i wish something that cute would happen to me! That's absolutely adorable!

I'll probably miss high school when it's gone, but for the moment, i can't wait to get out -_- Junior year is so hectic!

I'm writing the sequel right now :D three people asked for one so I decided to go ahead with it

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it! :)

[yaoi_loverz]

oh.. hye! =D i know i'm being random..
but i just want to say..
your story is soooooo CUTE! XD really!!

[olebade]

Yah, every girl has memories like this, but I only write them down if they're special to me. For some reason, i found this one special :) I'm glad I can make people remember their own experiences through my writings, it makes me happy to have that kind of effect :DDD

Falls into place? I don't know if I ever saw it that way, but i like thinking of it that way XD Maybe he did notice Kibum, maybe he didn't, I'll leave that to you to imagine.

I'm writing a sequel right now! three people asked for one so I'm doing it :)

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it!

[theia88]

this is so cute..i've ever had this kind of feeling too. when i was in junior highschool lol, but in my case i had crushed to my junior (omg) and till now, we haven't said a word to each other too, and i dunno where is he now after ..maybe 7-8 years till now XDDDD
but this story is sooo cute!! i like it ^^

[olebade]

That's cute! I crushed on my junior a couple years back as well ^^

I'm glad you liked my story! thanks for reading!

[volatileflame]

ah, i'm pretty sure most of us have had this high school experience. this definitely brings back a lot of memories for me. this was really cute. i enjoyed it a lot.

[olebade]

:D

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading!