Breathing and Heartbeats

[olebade]

Title: Breathing and Heartbeats
Pairing: Onew/Taemin
Rating: PG-13
Summary: I wondered if, because we didn’t breathe, we were considered ‘dead’.
Song used for inspiration: Röyksopp - Silver Cruiser
A/N This got first place in the familiar_melody contest #2 and I'm very proud of it. Thank you to everyone who voted for me! :)

Comments

[prek_drugz]

OOOOOH MY JESUS
I really like this story ;.;
I mean at first it was a bit silly to me because of the whole 'shoe' thing but then I got over it and really into the story.
It was so sad. The whole time I was like 'WWWHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYYYY?!?!?!!?' I was hoping they were magically going to find food or something >.< or mebbe a space cult IDK
Usually I don't cry over fanfictions but when I read that last line my eyes started welling up with tears. ;A; DAMN YOU BROTHER FOR BEING HERE WHILE I READ THIS!
but yeah
love! <3

[olebade]

yah the Shoe thing was weird, but i was half awake when i thought of it and then the next day when i was thinking clearer i coun't think of something to replace it so i just left it XD

I'm sorry I made you cry D: but i'm glad you liked it :D

thanks for reading!

[stuporsteam]

this is so sad!
i'm going to cry soon :'(

i love this, it's special
yet so touching....

[olebade]

i've had a couple friends read it and they all say it's special in a couple different ways XD

Thanks for reading! sorry i made u sad :( gald you liked it!

[olebade]

thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks for reading! :D

[intoxicatedbrat]

This is so beautiful, I have no words for it. D:
I really like this alot. It's my kind of story. If this was a book, I'd buy it. :'D
The fact that it's OnTae makes it a hundred times better!
Them finding each other other and conversing and Jinki protecting Taemin and dying for him, B'AWW. T.T And and Taemin holding on to Jinki till he died too. D: D:

The banishment for being different from the norm thing reminds me of The Chrysalids. I love that story.
And also, Royksopp is awesome. :'D

Amazing! Mem'ed!

[olebade]

:DDDDDD
I've never heard of that book. might have to check it out ^^
Thanks for reading!

[volatileflame]

this was so beautiful!

[olebade]

Thank you!

Thanks for reading! :D