Cursing Innocence (CH 1)

[olebade]

Title: Cursing Innocence
Rating: PG(?)
Pairing: eventual!Onew/Jonghyun, maybe more later
Genre: Fantasy
Summary: Jonghyun comes upon a street magician who performs a lot more than simple card tricks. He traps people in a world of magic and places curses upon them the moment they arrive. Jonghyun meets Taemin, Kibum, and Minho, three people who,

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[olebade]

Spot for lovelyrazel

[lovelyrazel]

OHMYGOODNESS . i do not know how i could have missed this.
sorry BB . T-T
imma read this, i'm so so sosososososososososososososososo sorry that i missed this !

[olebade]

haha i kinda wondered. anyway, it's alright!.....that reminds me. i forgot to leave you a spot on the new chapter lol better do that quick

[lovelyrazel]

OHMY OHMY OHMY OHMYYY GOD.
that was just wow.
bb, you are now one of my favorite authors & this is only the first chapter ! omoo.

i feel like your story and the people's curses are one huge riddle. i like that, i don't know why because usually i hate riddles and thinking in general but i like your story, it makes me think of ways and possibilities and all the weird stuff XD

i wonder how taemin will get his emotions back too. how can minho raise atlantis? and i have a feeling that maybe jonghyun is the lock to kibum's key? hmm, the possibilities :3

and i am off to the next chapter bb.

i am soo sorry for not reading this right away. pabo pabo razel ):

hopefully it's better late than never right ?

♥

plus thank you for the spot, even if i filled it in super duper late, (goes back to hating myself)

[a_life_defiant]

YAY!! update!!

I just keep getting sucked further into your magical little world! And Jinki really is a bastard, huh? LOL

Awesome chapter bb! I'm glad you're writing more too! This didn't turn out bad BTW. *loves*

♥

[olebade]

:) i'm glad you liked it. i was nervous about this chapter cause it was somewhat difficult to write DX

thanks for reading! next chapter will be up asap! :)

[ex_argh]

*shivers* this is so dark and sinister 8D I love your imagination! ♥ and this is just amazing :DDD
♥

[pinkshanell]

Awww. Minho curse is terrible.. To witness death repeatedly every time he sleeps. .. Wow..