The Music Stand and the Me On the Water

Jan 16, 2011 13:45

Title: The Music Stand and the Me On the Water
Rating: PG
Pairing: Ontae
Genre: Fantasy
Word count: 1,000
Summery: Taemin sees a music stand sitting in the water, but no one else sees it. He starts to think there is something wrong with him until a strange boy shows up.
A/N: This was written for a challenge my school Writing Club gave me. Write a ( Read more... )

Leave a comment

Comments 23

volatileflame January 16 2011, 22:40:51 UTC
wow~ this was really cool : )

Reply

olebade January 17 2011, 19:40:03 UTC
thanks :)
glad you liked it!

Reply


vipjuly January 16 2011, 23:01:39 UTC
oh my. someone left me this link and i'm very glad that i read it! (i mean i read every story that i'm recommended but you know, just in particular...asldkjfs)
anyway, this was simple yet so heavy and i felt my heart clench at the very end and i couldn't breathe for like 2 seconds after i read 'walk and walk and walk...'
this is really truly lovely! i hope that your writing club appreciated this story as much as it deserves to be :) ♥

Reply

olebade January 17 2011, 20:01:27 UTC
lol i'm thinking someone you know likes my writing because this is the second time you've been recommended to read my story lol
i'm glad you liked it. the challenge also said that it needed to be mysterious and intense and so i tried to put that into this so i'm glad to see it worked :)
they loved it and i'm glad you liked it too! thanks for reading! :)

Reply


mudasakiro January 17 2011, 02:12:19 UTC
A really, really beautiful story(:
I'm sure your writing club must have loved it, cos I love it!
It's really special, without the usual lovey dovey stuff.
Can't wait for your other pieces!
:D

Reply

olebade January 17 2011, 20:07:01 UTC
thank you!
my writing club did love it. it made me happy :D
sometimes i need a break from lovey dovey. it feels a little more free.
i'll get more up when i can!
thanks for reading! i'm glad you liked it :)

Reply

mudasakiro January 18 2011, 11:03:16 UTC
hahaha awesome!!!! (:

so is ontae your bias?! (squealing rn)

oh btw, i just posted a 2am fanfic.. i know it's not shinee but you mind having a look and give me some comments? cos it's like my first time hahah(:

Reply

olebade January 18 2011, 13:54:16 UTC
no ontae is not my bias (i just love them A LOT ^^) my bias is actually Jongyu but i write stories that go better with other couples lol half the time it's ontae.

ok i'll go take a look! :)

Reply


moonlight_bat January 29 2011, 17:41:56 UTC
woaaa... it's great! ^^
btw, aren't u going to continue "I love you..." (is it the right title? abut kyumin)... just curious.

Reply

olebade January 29 2011, 17:45:39 UTC
:) thanks!
yes i plan to continue it. i'm working on something else right now, but i will try to get another chapter of "To Love You" up as soon as i can. sorry for the wait!

Reply


dooseob4life March 4 2011, 00:25:44 UTC
wahh ur fic is awsome , ontae forever lol ! heheeheh so im kinda new on lj and i was wonderin if anyone could add me as a friend?

Reply

olebade March 5 2011, 00:05:48 UTC
thanks ^^

sure i'll add you :D welcome to lj!

Reply

dooseob4life March 5 2011, 18:36:43 UTC
aww thx ur da best!

Reply


Leave a comment

Up