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olebade

What You Hear & What I Want To Say, Jongyu

Apr 27, 2011 05:58

Title: What You Hear & What I Want To Say ( Read more... )

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bunnies_09 April 29 2011, 23:35:44 UTC

*sobs*
God, i'm crying right now...
This was heartbreaking T___T
and jonghyun died....!
Hiks, but really, i like this!
Thankyou for sharing :')

olebade April 30 2011, 04:24:38 UTC

:( don't cry.
yah...i tend to kill of a lot of people in my stories.
i'm glad you liked it tho!
thank you for reading! :)

kim_ri April 30 2011, 17:24:04 UTC

TEAARRRSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
DDDDDDDDDX
omg this was so heartbreaking, i love it to pieces asdjfkl;kjf
beautiful story
i love your connection of the snow globe at the end :)
good luck on the competition

olebade May 1 2011, 17:47:15 UTC

i really do need to write something more happy sometime.
but im glad you liked my story! :)
thanks for reading! :D

linnhe May 1 2011, 12:38:15 UTC

I would even head in the direction of his house even though it was the most painful place to visit because it was so heavily influenced by Jonghyun that tears came to my eyes just imagining him running out the front door or waving from his window or shouting from inside that he would be out in a second and then take half an hour.

I almost cried at this paragraph.

I read your Big Bang entry a little while ago and thought you had a wonderful writing style so when this popped into view I was rather excited to read it. I love all the glints of fire in your story; the fireflies, the sparklers, the glitter in the snowglobe, it's like you're mixing fairytale elements with reality.

A beautiful story <3

olebade May 1 2011, 18:08:27 UTC

awwwwwww im sorry im such a gloomy writer! :(

hehe, i don't know where my big bang entry came from, but a lot of people seemed to like it. :D

O_O i didn't even notice that the things i was using were "glints of fire" lol. i was just writing about simple things :)

im glad you liked it! thanks for reading! :)