Puppets - Part 3/3; Jongyu, Taekey, onesided!Jongho, PG-13

Aug 02, 2011 17:38

Title: Puppets - Part 3/3
Pairing/Focus: Jonghyun/Onew, Key/girl!Taemin, onsided!Jonghyun/Minho
Rating: PG-13
Final word count: 23,530
Summary: Where death can't keep loved ones apart, a fox reaches beyond his natural boundaries, and a puppet master is not what he seems.
A/N: Wrote this for this year's SHINee Big Bang. Yes, I know its rushed, but I ( Read more... )

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olebade August 6 2011, 07:54:12 UTC
lol honestly, i had an entire alternate ending planned out where no one was happy, but then i decided that i write too many stories with sad endings, so i forced this one to be a happy ending XD

and yes, people seem to love taekey in this (SUCCESS!) which obviously makes me happy lol

thanks for reading! home the ending wasnt too terrible! XP

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olebade August 6 2011, 20:01:42 UTC
yah i felt bad for minho and i actually was going to put something at the end about later human life and him finding someone, but it felt too clean. besides, i was working up to the last minute and i needed to end it :/

lol agreed. the only taekey that i manage to find is on the extreme ends opposite ends of the spectrum. they're either in a mother/son relationship or theyr only having sex and that stuff just doesnt do it for me lol (that could just be me tho :P)

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nami_go August 13 2011, 14:44:33 UTC
i'm in love with the story and you got 1 vote from me at shineebigbang ^^
TaeKey's part was my favourite.
Kibum was sooooooo~~~~ cute >w

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olebade August 13 2011, 17:49:42 UTC
^^ thank you so much. i'm glad you like it :)

i enjoyed writing kibum that way. it was different from how people usually write him because he wasn't as snarky XD

thank you for commenting! :)

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irethsingollo September 14 2011, 22:33:10 UTC
Minhoooooooo ;~~~~;

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olebade September 14 2011, 22:55:05 UTC
Honestly, he's my least favorite too. I just don't get why everyone loves him so much, but I'm slowly warming up to him :) (mostly my friend's fault XD)
i'm glad you liked his character, because i didnt really know how to portray him when i started this lol. at first i was like "should he be kind? yah. wait! no i want him to be kinda mean. but wait, is there a reason he's mean? wait why would he enjoy entertaining kids if he was mean? hmmm...." eventually i settled on kind of all of them lol XD

lol awwwwwww sorry i made you cry! (its like this unwanted talent to make my readers cry lol)

YES I LOVE HARRY POTTER! and im the same way. all the movies are done now and ive read all the books it feels like my childhood is over and now i dont know what to do T_T they were the books that got me to like reading!

:D i'm glad you liked it! ♥ and its alright that you were slow. really, the only reason i get to your story so quickly is because when i dont have work, i have WAY too much time on my hands lol

and OMG YES I LOVED YOUR GIF COMMENTS ( ... )

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irethsingollo September 18 2011, 12:33:43 UTC
Sorry for the late reply OTL
Omo that's even more awesome if you don't like him and wrote him out like this ♥ Haha my friend had a period of Minho obsession too, but instead of dragging me into it made me detest him more /fail

IKR? I read HP exactly when I was 11 and I believed I'll get a letter from Hogwarts too TAT I feel like re-reading it forever, though I've already done that last year haha (re-read all 7 8'D)

Asdf I have to watch WGM with those two, love the sfm ;~; Gain is my female bias forever ♥♥♥

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