Fanfiction: Justic in good time. 1/?

[oliviasolar]

Title: Justice in good time
Summary: Dave, a criminal in 2006 wakes up in 1973. Has Sam/Gene and Sam/Annie friendship. No slash. 
Rating: I don't know how this goes, it has swearing in it and violence.
chapter lengh:665
Notes: This should be a long one I hope. This is based after the finale.  I don't have a beta at the moment, if anyone would like to

Comments

[sytaxia]

Ooh, first comment! This was just great, the bits of nothing but dialogue really speed the flow of the story, and I love the idea of someone else going through the same experiences as Sam - puts a whole different spin on things, especially if it's a villain. Marvelous idea, I hope it goes on for a while!

Also, if you're stuck for a beta, I can help, but it might be better to pick someone else, if you get any other volunteers - I'm a Dix, not a Brit, so I'm liable to miss a ton of colloquialisms, word choices and speech rhythms. But if you're scraping the bottom of the barrel, well, there I'll be :)

[oliviasolar]

Thankyou very much! I was worried I'd used too much speech and not enough discription.
Don't worry, I don't even know how to spell colloquialisms or the whole meaning of it so I think I fell out of the barrel looong ago lol.
I'll see who else there is too but your winning so far lol.